Reviews for The Line
Guest chapter 6 . 10/10/2017
Is there going to be anymore to this story I was getting really into it
Fher34 chapter 6 . 2/1/2016
*screaming
First of all, that JERK!
Second, ouch. Mai' s emotions and pain even pained me. Dang, you got talent. I hope you can stick with the story and update soon. This story is quite entertaining, even though I sometimes wish to smack naru so hard he'll see Gene up in heaven.
As for finally understanding what had gone up his star and died, wow. Kim is the best for letting us know.
Thank u for writing!
Fher34 chapter 4 . 2/1/2016
Naru, I don't think using on n ending up in a hospital is a way to make up but...well
This was creepy to read. Yay.
Btw why didn't mai use her defences like the 9 cuts?
Fher34 chapter 3 . 2/1/2016
Oh, hell. Things got pretty intense in there.
Ugh. Naru u jerk
I wanna hug Mai. I almost expected her to quit, but knowing how much she loves spr...well, it would be hard.
Harder still is knowing that she has no family and that spr is it.
Fher34 chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
Naru u cold bastard.
Mai, I know it's hard but keep it up.
Ah, I feel sympathy for the clients!
Fher34 chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
Oh, I like this.
The characters are in character, Ma I is keeping things interestingly and the plot sounds true. :D
NaginiFay chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
I am so glad you are back!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2015
Nice and awkward between them, can't wait to see what happens next. Keep 'em coming.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2015
Really awesome chapter please update again soon! :)
AmyNChan chapter 6 . 8/14/2015
Dang... Seriously, Naru. I might have hit you.
IWillBelieveIt If I CanDreamIt chapter 5 . 6/29/2015
This is great I can't wait to read more
A x
MzShellSan chapter 5 . 3/19/2015
Great story so far. Please update soon.
slvrphoenx chapter 5 . 2/8/2015
i really enjoyed this chapter. great writing.
vampgirl1309 chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
Great updat . Loved it!
Ishval chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
I'm just slightly confused, is the case over? Glad that Mai's out of the hospital but Naru could have been just a little bit nicer to her. Update soon please. :)
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