Grt work man. Too much satisfied. I just didnt like serena getting stripped by calem. That part was horrible

You’re not as much as a dick as Officer Frank Tenpenny of the game GTA San Andreas.

What in the flying fuck did I just read... if Ash being angsty was bad enough in the first chapter, this prick in a fedora causing grief for no apparent reason just made me lose any interest I may have had in the story. The worst villain is one without deep motivation. The Joker‘s motivation is as insane as he is, but it at least makes sense in some fucked up way... this villain is just crazy because you needed to force a trauma into a world seemingly devoid of it to make your bitchy protagonist what he is.

it was aka good

This book is amazing

There's one problem with this. Electric-type Pokémon are immune to paralysis, so moves like Stun Spore would be ineffective against Pichu.

I really dislike it when someone uses a good character and make them horrible to satisfy their angsty needs.

Wow... Simply amazing
Five Stars from me!

This chapter contains the greatest 1st kiss in Fanfiction history

- Chase Marsh
.of A.C.O.S. band
(A Collection Of Souls)

Red broke through to Ash

jesus christ-Ash is a mommy

Fucking Amazing

Do u have any stories u would recommend reading?

(To Deltared52952): Hi, regarding to your doubts about why Drew killed Delia, you need read the chapter 12 "Betrayal" again, if you read it carefully, you could see that Drew was trying to kill Ash, not Delia, he killed her because Delia pushed Ash out of the way of the flamethrower of Drew's flygon, saving his life to cost of her own life. Even for this ash was blaming himself during the funeral, because he thinks that if he wasn't afraid from the attack of flygon and he was quick to dodge the attack for himself, Delia wouldn't put herself in the harm way to saves him.

But as Drew failed in kill Ash to eliminate him as an obstacle to had may as his girlfriend and killed in turn his mother, he chose change his original plans of kill Ash, and instead he framed Ash for kill his mother to difame him and that may ends with him as his girlfriend.

I hope that i would be of help to clear your doubts.

It was heart breaking and very emotional I was very moved by it one complicated though don't take it personal you never address why Drew killed Ash's mom.