Go watch bath to the English rub loser

Regarding the explanation... I still don't get it.
Makes sense for Minato, but Kushina didn't have a body and Kurama was fine in the seal in the future.
Although if it's a matter of Naruto's body handling that much chakra that's different :3

update plz

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Oh god! Love it so much.

Sounds interesting ;)

the fic should have an actual plot, its too interesting to stay a crack/parody fic, your writing style is just fine, no need to conform to others, either A) or B) is fine as long as when you do A) you only do it once, otherwise itll get confusing over whos talking, interesting story so far please update soon

I'm liking this so far, and I can't wait for more. to answer your questions:
1. I think it should have an actual plot; I'd be especially anxious to see Itachi's reaction to Sasuke.
2. either or, really; though I personally am more partial to B.

Yes plot. Writing style the same.

Love the story so far!

love this fic so far please update when you can

Nami no kuni (Land of wave)
Mizu no kuni(Land of water)

Świetny rozdział, widać duuuża poprawę w stosunku do poprzedniego. Trzymaj tak dalej! Ciekawe, jak akcja dalej się potoczy... Nie mogę się doczekać :) Pozdrawiam!
nika0645

Thanks for this chapter !
You improved a lot since the last one. I enjoyed the scene with the Sandaime, the one with Minato and the one with Kurama. More than the others that is.
The scene with Sakura was well made, it explained her behaviour. Well done !
I can't wait for the next chapter !. :)

As a reader and a self-proclaimed grammar-nazi, I say B. A is leading to too huge of text chunks, which can make larger paragraphs harder to read. (Yes, I just answered your last question first...)

As for the rest of it though, I really can't say. Some plot is nessecary to drive the story along (because this isn't technically a fluff piece, or a ridiculous parody, and introducing 'the three clones' and dragging Fu and the rest into the mix has changed the story too much for you to completely follow canon).

Short thoughts today, I had to write two essays for an exam...Canadians are boring! (and so is their history!)...not that you care. Sorry.

Keep writing! It's an interesting idea, and I'm eager to see where you take it!