Will you commit? Or just leave the Story incomplete

You have got to stop saying, "Suddenly", and "Instantly".

Seriously, whenever ANYTHING happens, you use one of those words. Stop. It's wrong.

Imma read ALL of this. :V

Author's notes mid-chapter are really tacky, in my opinion. You might want to use bolded asterisks or citations instead, putting your comments at the bottom of a chapter. It looks nicer and doesn't break immersion as much.

...where the hell is Sora's gummi ship? Did you seriously just have him leave it outside of the old mansion? I know he rode the train back with the girls, but I hoped you'd claim the ship had a homing feature or something (like how Sora can board at different save points in the game). Running to the rescue seems sort of asinine when he could just do an in-atmosphere or suborbital trip in his gummi ship.

Meh. Plot holes are a thing, I guess. Not a bad fic so far.

*Ozpin spoke as he turned around, a clam smile on his face as always*

"A clam smile". For some reason picturing what this might look like made me giggle far more than I should have. Gotta love typos.

OH MY GOD IS THAT SAI- OH MY GOD...

Insignia:67DCIB5W9PYPYSPEKS4W00GZHJ7Z2U85IWD78N9A
This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.

Nice ending. To be honest with all the anime you brought in I expected a joke ending. Like one punch man coming out of freaking nowhere and ending Xehanort in one punch. Then while everyone’s jaw is dropped he falls to his knees like dammit why I beat him in one punch!

Dear Mr. IMSOAWESOME, I regret to inform you that you have made several enemies this chapter. Please know that if Raven and Ruby stay dead, we will find you, and we will hurt you.
Sincerely, Anonymous Hunters.

D-Did you just turn Ruby into a...You sadistic little (Insert phrase of choice).

I can let a lot of things go, but try to destroy the Sora-Kairi relationship, and I will find you, and I will make you experience pain the likes of which you have never felt before.

You killed Nora. For that crime, I'm sending Agents Texas, Carolina, and the Meta from Red Vs. Blue after you. In other words, you're royally screwed.

Remember children: don't hide fish from her Meowjesty

WHAT, in Leonard Church's name, did I read at the end of this chapter?
And if you don't know who Church is, watch Red Vs. Blue by Rooster Teeth.