it was all cute and fluffy and sweet that i thought my teeht would rot...WAH! why cant i write any thing this good T_T

sequel! ehehe... although it is a bit-OOC of shinobu not to call keitarou and naru sempais... this is a sweet fic... pls make more...

go ahead and write it.

thanks

Sweet fic about the cutest Hinata girlShinobu:)

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!(KEEP WRITING!)

I meant to review this the first time I read it but I forgot. Anyway this was extremely well written. I really hope that you write more.

write the sequal damn you

This is pretty good. Write more plz.

damn right you should make a sequel and soon at that very soon this is a great story and you should continue it soon

THAT WAS THE BEST ENDING I'VE EVER READ! Please write a sequel. I'm begging you! That was the definition of a Love Hina fic, perfect in every way. Good job. Really good job. Oh, and btw, it was a great fic!

you should write a sequel i thought that story was pretty good myself and let me tell you i've read quite alot of love hina fanfictions on this site and this was one of the best by far

OMG...that was PERFECT...I totally loved that...that was better than that and oh so SWEET:D...THANKS...that was fantastic:D

Cute story... and Shinobu is still my favourite, even though K/S wouldn't really work out, IMHO.

Nice style, good formatting and no speeling errors!

Keep them coming...

S

Well this was really good. Firstly I'd like to point out one grammatical thing you forgot throughout this story. After ending a person talking, you have to a comma at the end so for instance...

"I didn't find it outside," Keitaro added. You forgot this point most of the time, until the end paragraphs. Nothing bad or anything. Even I do this error too. Just bear that in mind. OK, onto something nice...I've recently been drawn to Shinobu/Keitaro fics as well as Keitaro/Motoko. Shinobu is such a sweet girl and she sounds convincing in this story. So shy around Urashima Sempai. I found it so touching how Keitaro told Shinobu that she would be beautiful when she grows up. That was so sweet of him. I just wish Naru and Motoko would see that a lot more rather than beat the crap out of him ;; I wouldn't mind if there was a sequel to this. Keitaro could always be with a girl who doesn't scold him every single day or punches him the face ;; Sweet story by the way.

AW! I just got my first two Love Hina Mangas and I am obsessed. I always wanted to read a Shinobo/Keitaru fanfic! Now you have inspired me to do it! Yay! Off to writing I go. Keep up the good work. One word...Perfect grammer. Ok so that was two words. What i didn't like is the end! KISS DAMNIT! A real one! Lip lock I say! LOL. U should do a sequel, that is if you want to.

OH YES! Write it, but only if it continues like this...SHINOBU!