NERD NERD NERD

Will that was interesting story. I will be looking forward to more. But there's still a lot I don't get. Yes I'm trying to understand but I'm kind of all over the place.:P
Well I do have to say I did like Slippy in this one.
He seem a lot more helpfull to the team and
not at all a loser like other writher make him out to be.
Like get reel people it's the nerds that be doing most of the work for us.

Pretty dang good so far, but I have a few problems with this two-parter:
1: What bad things would Joeseph do? Fox wasn't really being reasonable there.
2: Okay... where did Joeseph get that spaceship? Was it a gift from his dad? Who knows, I'll probably find out in future episodes.
3: Okay... random end of the world, I think there would've been weather predictions about that kind of stuff.
Anyway, pardon me for my nitpicking, Nostalgia Critic and Linkara made me this way.

Cool, this is a really awesome sounding fanfic.

So the story starts with some random nightmare/vision sequence, which leads to the proper introduction to some random college student that doesn't really introduce him at all, which leads to us learning that he has a random alien spaceship somehow, which then leads to the Eath very randomly blowing up.
Not a very good start in my opinion. Sorry. It is just that nothing makes any sense at all.
As for the whole age thing, Krystal is actually much younger then the rest of the Star Fox cast. By Star Fox Command she would only be either twenty one, or twenty two. As a matter of fact unless you have the story set years after Command plenty of the SF characters wouldn't even be in their thirties.

Anyway, I will read the rest tomorrow.

UPDATE ANNOUNCEMENT: Next episode is going to be out later because of two reasons: One: Episode Twelve is going to blow your mind. Two: I am going back and revamping all early episodes of Season One so go back and read to be kept up to speed on the storyline. Read on people...

this story is good to me so far I can't wait for the next episode or chapter keep up the good work

Okay cool. This season is coming to an end, already. If you want more information go to the bottom of my profile and read. Season One will be a cliff hanger for action packed Season Two...

Joseph is great. This is the guy that was listed as guest user by the way. For some reason it puts me down as Guest in the FanFiction app.

I'm very glad you like it. What do you think of Joseph?

Adorable chapter :) Can't wait for the next episode.

That's strange how it put me down as guest :\

For the comment I hope you like next episode. It will be called Love at second sight. Also, you might want to get an account.

Just started reading your story/series. That last episode almost made me sob. Great story (or series/season) :D

Please give me reviews if you read this, tell me what you think, ideas for episodes, and just plain old chatter.
-G.M.E.