Although you tied everythink up, I can't say I liked the end. The story towards the last 3 chapters felt rushed instead of letting it play out naturally. Readers are always going to want more quickly, but you are the writer and you set the pace. Don't just rush the story to churn it out quickly, it's unsatisfying to you and to us. Only a young reader would be happy with a hastily worded story. You have a lot of potential to write a well crafted story.

Nice Story- I liked it!

I totally loved this story, especially the end with the very romantic Neric Kiss and those two really make such a cute couple.

Nice ending. Any plans for more stories? Please let me know when you hsve something. Thanks!

I absolutely loved it! Every single bit of it. Thank you. Plus the ending was awesome. Waiting for more!
-Ellie!

Thanks for the story; it was a great read. Looking forwards to the next one.

Oh no the End :((( But its a great end. I loved your story and i love the end !please write more :D

Omg great Chapter! More Neric. I Want more Neric !

This story is pretty slick, and a work of genius. Keep it going.

excellent chapter

excellent chapter

fabulous chapter

granger will find out!
fabulous chapter

go team callen
excellent chapter

will eric survive?
who is after the team?
fabulous chapter