Wonderful, absolutely beautiful ending to an amazingly fun story. Thank you so much for brightening my days with Vala and Daniel. I'm soooo sorry it took me forever to comment on this great chapter but i've been recovering from surgery. I'm so happy i was able to finish reading this story since it is my absolute favorite :) Can't wait to move onto the other Vala/Daniel adventures you have posted. Thank you again for taking the time to write these great stories. So sad it had to end, but all good things come to end eventually. Take care and keep writing.
V-chan

Nice first chapter! Fun setting, and I like hearing Vala say she feels safe.

wonderful story
enjoyed reading it

Awe! That was perfect! Great story. :)

'The leader of the shadows'-*snirkle!*

Oh, so much goodness in this I don't know where to start! Except to bemoan the fact that it's over! So sappy and sweet when Vala cries and wipes her tears off. I like that she doesn't care what she looks like, she just wants to experience what Daniel has prepared for her. She is childlike yet quite definitely all-woman at the same time!

I have to say, though, that for one horrible, terrified moment I thought you might extend the suspense and have Vala say 'no'! Of course immediately following up with Daniel convincing her, putting her fears to rest, etc. Happy this didn't happen, I don't think my heart could've taken it!

Next story, please! ;-)

This was such a sweet chapter. I loved how everyone cares so much about Vala that they tried to make her day wonderful. Also, i love love love how Daniel is being such a sweetheart and creating a day in Paris at the SGC. Now i want to marry him...lol.
I'm so bummed that there is only one chapter left. I have really loved this story. Also, i'm sooo sorry i took forever to review...life tends to get in the way :P Take care and keep writing, you are an amazing writer.
Humble fan, V-Chan

Yeh! She got her Disneyland and her prince! Loved it and loved the last scene where he kicked the castle door shut-hee hee could totally picture it.

Great story!

well, there ya go! Now on to the wedding, right?

Daniel ROCKS! Wow - what a great setting!
Wonderful fairytale happy ending!
BTW-you rock, too-as this was all your creation!

fabulous chapter

Another brilliant chapter :o) Ab loved that Daniel confided in Sam and her reaction - so sweet!

Don't feel bad, Daniel, everything will turn out okay! Yep, I'm sure of it, because Vala and Daniel will always find a way! Can't wait for Daniel to bring the Teacup Ride into the infirmary! Post soon!

Great as always!

Aww sounds like the next chapter is going to be lots of fun :o) Enjoyed this chapter loads - poor Vala. I'm sure she'll love Daniel's disneyland though!