please update I actually like this story and I want to know what happens next

lol that is funny

There are a few grammar issues and again it was a bit on the short side but other than that it was awesome :D

Well it was a little short but it gives us the gist of whats going on so i really cant complain.

Other than that the grammar and what not where both without errors as far as i could see. I hope you update soon with more detail next time because this seems like it could be be pretty good :D
Ciao

Well, it seems like it'll be interesting. And some time, you should fix the first paragraph, whenever someone new is talking, it means it starts in a new paragraph. You seemed to get it though at the end.
Good luck in your writing, and I look forward to Dante's interaction with the shinigami. :)