Spartan-III don’t hug my good man they bump first causally. Hug. No. Bump fists. Yes

Should have never started a rewrite this was fine as it was should have just kept going

Clancy is the legendary CHIPS DUBBO! look him up its cool :)

Good story

Roar hilarious

You have a sick sense of humor... HE JUST LOST HIS ARM!

Just to correct a error at the begging he was taken in at the age of six to the spartan3 program and at the end of reach noble6 is the age between 19 and 21

Misspelled Sanghelli

Husky not to be mean or over critical but in halo ,hunters cannot be infected due to there actual bodies. being too small to be infected since they are made of small wormlike creatures so the goliath form can not exist.:(but still love the 14 ft tall monster though!;)

Hey there! I know this is late, but I noticed that on this chapter, there is a little part that is not what happened. That part is the part where Private Jenkins is hanging on the ceiling, if you read Halo: The Flood I believe he infact was still alive, well he was still conscious and the flood controlled him at the same time. But anyways good chapters so far!

Ugh, that's the point of writing a fanfic of Reach, we all know six dies but it's about the what if?

Spartan-B312 died at the hand of a Sangheili.

Please learn some facts BEFORE writing a fanfiction.

Thank you,

Have a good day.

His date of death was August 30, 2552 if that helps.

Really clever name for the chapter

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Interesting, I'll give this a whirl

you could have had a Jun drive a mongoose there and jump off at the last second ram the jackel off a roof and have it shoot the mongoose and make it explode next to a fuel tank like on that one firefight map