Reviews for Burning Heat
maf4104 chapter 2 . 1/9/2019
I would really like it if you made more chapters because I really lile this story.
Annalise .A. Rausch chapter 2 . 10/29/2018
THANK YOU. DEAR LORD, I FUCKING LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW! LOVED IT. GOOG JOB.
Zela Night chapter 2 . 3/28/2018
I like this second chapter more.
It has more emotions and less raw descriptions that lack emotion.
You Thought chapter 2 . 12/10/2017
WHYYYYYYYYY?! ALL I WANT IS TO READ GREAT FANFICS! MAKE MORE PLS, I BEG YOU! Amazing job, btw.
You Thought chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
Surprised. Good surprised.
Ooba chapter 2 . 11/20/2017
I loved it.
mimi-chan77 chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
I fell in love with your story! ʚ( ω )ɞ
It's awesome! ε*Ҙ
Thank you chapter 2 . 10/2/2016
This is a really well written and interesting little story. The plot is pretty good considering it only has two chapters. The ending is reallllyyyy cute too! ;)
Lady Desdemona Hawkings chapter 2 . 6/23/2016
THIS IS SO GOOD! I wish there's more. *dreamy sigh . Maybe a continuation where Eren got pregnant? *wiggle me eyebrows
JamieWayland chapter 2 . 11/7/2015
Write another chapter with their children being born
M.Lambda chapter 2 . 11/3/2015
It was hot, it was bestial, it was confusing but I liked it very much! Made my heart pound! It was kind of cute.
I liked the fact that you divided the chapter with each point of view and in continuation of the story, not just the other point of view of the same story.
I also liked your way of writing the story, their were suspense, and there were good scenes of sex, you didn't describe too much, and that fact made it even more erotic. The story in itself was interesting, you got something!
I hope for you next story, it would be of the same quality, and maybe even better!
Keep the good work.
shelby98 chapter 2 . 10/13/2015
I loved this! I wish there were more omega/alpha stories like this.
The Black Cat of Misfortune TI chapter 2 . 8/10/2015
I think you should continue this story. I really do love the alpha and omega stories, but most are Omega!Levi and I don't like that.
Asrith33 chapter 2 . 6/14/2015
When are you going to continue? It's getting so good, but it looks like you haven't updated in a long time. Sad face.
Natsuki D chapter 2 . 5/8/2015
inspiration mean new chapter?
i feel bad for Jean (poor guy)
what are the others btw?
update if you do!
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