... NOOOOOOO. I-is there any way that you might do a sequel to this? This story was really great ;A;

But on another note, I was a bit confused because you used "he" for Severus all the time, but I think once or twice you used "she" and then you switched from people calling her "Seraphina" to them constantly calling her "Severus" anyway...

And in some sentences, there were words missing or there twice...

I really liked it anyway. Especially the whole business with Severus and Remus. That was fantastic "D

I actually sad about the fic having to end... You said something about editing and reposting it, yes? Where can I find it, then?

Yumi

Wow. Just wow.

Neat story. I like how much plot there is to it and the way that it was slowly revealed. The conflicting angles at the end are really well done.

Still looks like there are a few chapters to look over, but overall a great piece.

Thank you for sharing it.

This is an awesome story! It has quickly become one of my favourites!

I'm begging on my knees for a sequel!

I loved your story! I liked it the way it was, I didn't feel there was a need to cut anything, but it's your story, so do what you think is best ;) I was hoping for something more between Sirius and Seraphina/Severus. Perhaps in a sequel? ;)

All the best!

P.S. I hope I made it review number 60 with this ;P I like the number ;D

Oh, my. What happens next? This is very, *very* good writing, and I can't wait for your schedule to allow you to get back to this story. Keep up the good work. Zafaran

„Mirror mirror on the wall...“ (giggle)

„...tell me when the story comes to an end...“

...sigh... I like the summing up in the last chapter, it makes it easier to remember the story because of the long interruptions. I will be patient. It’s worthwile doing.

wonderful chapter and well worth the wait, as always looking forward to more.

Good chapter! Sirius is a stubborn little dude, isn't he? LOL Not that it's completely unwarranted. Great chapter! Please write more. And yes, you are a tease! LOL
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DreamWeaver

Wow, that "funeral" of the "original" Severus was quite weird... but a very good idea for the story and - like every chapter of yours - very good written.
And I like the "Remus-thing"! (I'm sure you know what I mean...)

A vrey engrossing story! I think it's wonderful! Very different and well written. Your use of emotive and evocative language and imagery is very well done and your characterisation is also very good.
The little hints at Remus/Sev and Sirius/Sev is very cute. LOL A female Severus, how sweet. LOL Please write more!
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DreamWeaver

WOW! I loved that whole lot of chappies, they were amazing, please continue.

Hmm. I'm going to reserve judgement on the way the plot is going until I see where it goes. I'm hoping that Remus and Sirius won't find themselves slowly being written out of the story in favor of the three new characters...

Very interesting, very very good. I love this fic. so glad you updated and can't wait for more.

huggs,

louise

Oh- now I'm able to see it: „The Saviour.“ Some things are getting clearer now – just as you promised. I had really no idea. What a surprise! I really love your story very much. It’s something to dream away...

Oh- now I'm able to see it: „The Saviour.“ Some things are getting clearer now – just as you promised. I had really no idea. What a surprise! I really love your story very much. It’s something to dream away...