Wow! Really cool story, I think that your writing style and use of techniques makes it enjoyable to read, even if the content is dark

Don't say fuck you to Satan

Please update! Its almost been a year! Please I have to know to happens! I really like the story!

Well now that was

Say you would continue!This is really interesting. Dark side of Rin is really hot!

Non-story entries are not allowed. I get that you want to inform readers but you could have attached this to one of the chapters with story content instead of making it it's own chapter.

Also, remember MA content isn't allowed. If you plain to include descriptions of penetration or foreplay, you'll need to move it to another site. The M rating can only be implied or a non-descriptive entry.

you have made me a very happy person :D

Thank you for continuing!

Yay! Can't wait for the update!

Holy crap, that was awesome! Please update!

are your finals finished yet?

Write more please!

its a pretty amazing fanfic i love it. i just cant wait to see yukios face when he seas his brother. in other words...
IT is awesome! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Hay keep going, it seems like it's going to be good

... you... scared me...for life...I don't even know what to think...