Ok just finished. That took a while, but it was worth it. First off, I love Elsa. Can I have her? :-) lol it was nice to see the boys gets some credit. That was different. Capture the characters very well. I approve.

OMG! How amazing! I love it great job! Keep writting!

What a great way to wrap up the story! I'm always glad for a happy ending, and though Elsa and her family had to go back to Brazil, it was wonderful that everything worked out like it should. Congratulations on finishing your story!

Great job! I liked how you had them say goodbye, and the gift giving. I kinda cried at the end a bit, having the boys have to say goodbye to their sister.

I agree with my cousins. Thanks for such a great story. Haru is feeling more sadness than most people do in a lifetime. But he's also feeling happiness. Because there are now many people who would do anything to keep his daughter and family safe. The Hamato clan really do deserve the medal of honor from the AKM. Miwa should have more confidence in herself. At least she's not mutated like in the cartoon. The 1987 Elsa is a little more out spoken than baby Elsa. Haru and Bryce are sure happy being with Elsa's New York family. But I can't blame them for wanting to go back to Brazil. April and Casey got great gifts just like the Hamato clan from Haru. Such a sweet goodbye between everyone. I'm glad Mikey cried out loud, while Raph, Leo, Donnie, Splinter, and everyone expressed their own way.

I agree with my sister. It made me cry the whole time. Haru and family didn't deserve all of this bad stuff. At least soon Ingrid will be buried in her home. The only bad news is that poor Elsa will have to leave her heroic New York family. Haru and Bryce really are being strong for the baby. Bryce and Karai have sure become good friends. That was quite an awards ceremony for the heroes of Earth. Leo and Splinter were so tough during it. The 1987 versions of Elsa and her family may be similar but they're also very different. How will the Hamato clan run their restaurant? Donnie and Mikey used their new gifts so quickly. Mikey is so cute expressing his sadness at Elsa leaving. Of course Leo and Splinter keep their emotions in until Haru leaves with his family. I hope you'll write a sequel someday.

Sorry for taking so long to review. I've just been kind of busy. This such a touching ending to a great story. That's so sad when poor Haru had to see Ingrid's body. And Elsa keeps asking questions he can't answer. Mikey and Elsa aren't afraid to admit their sadness. It really is for the best for Haru, Bryce, and the baby to leave. How cool that the turtles and Splinter are getting medals for their recent heroic acts. Karai's fate in this is better than it is in the cartoon. Donnie did good when he kept Ingrid's body safe. And Leo and Raph express their feelings very well. How cool that baby Elsa met the 1987 versions of herself and family again. Those are great gifts Haru and Bryce gave to the Hamato clan. Elsa, Haru, and Bryce are definitely not monsters. The Shredder and Robert are monsters though. What a nice goodbye for everyone.

Bravo! I love the ending, it is 100x better than the original. Short cut sweet, fin! Congrats agian chica!

You make sequel right? Please do sequel!

This is awesome! I loved Elsa, and I loved how they're handling the trials, really realistic, good job researching! I cried when Marisol died, it really hit me then.

I noticed you sometimes would run together different people speaking into one paragraph. It was hard to follow along with it a bit, because I kept getting confused on who was speaking. Other then that, it was completely amazing!

Great story looking forward to the updat

What a pity the story's almost over. But it was pretty good. Even with some heroes dying. I bet if Marisol had lived, Haru would've taken her in. And she and Leo could've been happy too. Just when I thought that Bryce's mother was the worst, Ingrid's parents get the gold. There's also the Shredder, but I was speaking about some of Elsa's family at the moment. The trial had other mutants, that's so cool. Even the judge was a mutant. Tiger Claw may have almost attacked Miwa, but at least they both testified against Robert. Shredder really is no longer a man, just an it. Especially when he whines about his burns. He should be grateful he's not dead like he should've been long ago. I bet most of the mutants in the court used to be human. Elsa will be so sad in the next chapter.

I agree with my sister. Leo having to go through his first real heartbreak. It doesn't really count with Karai, since there was still a chance to convince her to switch sides. Elsa has gone through so much in her barely begun life. I already knew about Ingrid and Haru, it just sounded so emotional when he discussed it with Splinter and the others. Marisol will be remembered for loving Leo and saving Elsa. Ingrid's parents are worse than Bryce's mother. And the trail was sure life changing. Of course Raphael, Miwa, and Haru would yell after the Shredder pleads not guilty. He really has become a bigger traitor than Hitler. He had no good reason to want to kill Splinter, then commit treason. I hope Haru will be able to break the bad news gently to Elsa. The last chapter will be cool.

What a very cool chapter. Poor Leo, about dealing with Marisol's death. And the Zamorra/Stone family is even sadder than I thought. Unless Ingrid's parents or Bryce's mother have a death wish, they will stay away forever. I understand Elsa's frustration, at not understanding all the stuff she's gone through. At least Leo was able to visit Marisol's grave along with Haru, Bryce, and Karai. I think they could've dated. That was one crazy trial for Robert and the Shredder. But at least it all worked out. I hope the woman who compared Shredder to Hitler will be okay. But he really has become worse than Hitler. Robert was pretty bad too, and they both had the nerve to plead not guilty. But going back to Brazil will be hard for Haru and his family. Since Elsa won't be living with the turtles and Splinter anymore.

i loved the part when Elsa meet her other side