I fucking love Red... just "Shit we're doomed!"

I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

What happened to using Abra to teleport?

Red's reaction to Jenny wanting to join is a big mood! One that I understand wholeheartedly lmao!

Are you ever going to continue this? Also why so may ash being called harry!

This sounds great and I would love to read more of this to find out just where you are going to go next with this story.

This is great... but you keep calling Ash "Harry". Been reading any Harry Potter recently? ;-D

"Shit we're doomed!"

Omg well said Red... Well said. Tbh I would have said those exact same words. In fact I was literally thinking "Oh god, oh no" about a few lines up above that so when I read it I laughed myself into a coughing fit like a moron. My sick ass is not supposed to be laughing that hard!

Oh god this is so adorable. I think I am in love with this story. You found the balance between cute and seriousness.

Just to let you know, you call Ash 'Harry' a couple times. I love the story though!

Have ash be very anti social

I hope you continue this I loved it just started reading and already I didn't want to stop :) very nice tho

I like your Ash cannot wait to see more

this story is interesting. please update soon because I'm liking this story already. :-)

I can't wait till they meet Red's pokemon. I can see Pika and Pikachu having a stare down then complaining on how much trouble their trainers are. Also can't wait to find out how and when they figure out Red League Champion. Now that would be funny. Can't wait for the next update!