Lucy isn’t weak now.

I love this fanfic and got nothing against it
I just want to say that the story feels hectic... like there is so much happening in such a short amount of time (this isn't bad and I feel like you are doing a really good job at describing what is happening in a way the makes the story unique)
but yeah I love this fanfic and keep up the good work

Only wish there is more

The story is good, I hope it continues, greetings, see you, bye!

Continua es una gran historia

Have a chance to continue this story?
She is very good.

hope this story will continue

of all those painful words from uncaring people... I just can say, you need redeemer for this story my friend... dont worry I will help you with spirit building... you will do fine

You have a serious problem with word like "We're, they're, their, which and explained". If you're unsure about how to spell those word's properly then Google it or something.

It's very cringy to read.

Natsu is guild master but still a brat. His daughter just died because of one of the perpetrator. The princess. And he just what?. Blushes because of letter. No consequences or what? For damaging property? Assisting criminal? Attempting apocalypse?There must be punishment, even for royalty.

Reading this fic pisses me off. The execution is terrible and the storyline is bad. Natsu still same old weak without changes.

its a shame this is dead

You got quite a few typo's that make the scene's far less serious than what you probably intended it to be. They make for some really funny images.

But seriously you should do a spelling check because it gets old very fast.

this fic is garbage

Seriously? Fairy Flame Dragon is the best you could come up with? Why does he even need another mode? Why didn't he just improve the overall power of his abilities while practicing his fire manipulation? He could be the next Genryusai Yamamoto. Also, why are all three of them attacking Hades all at once? I assume all three of them are each a match for him individually?