Please continue! ﹏This is going to be interesting!

Awesome

Welcome back _
Well, I'd say I can't see any mistakes here (I'm doubtful about the phrase "packed to the gills")

I think it's rather odd you chose a reader insert format though.

Neko: I'm a bit confused...
Niky: Read it again then! *bonks her head*
Neko: Ouch!
Niky: 'Defense Squad' Are we in Bleach? XD

Is it some kind of vision we have? We'll never know!

I hope u update soon! And ur other stories!

ooow, interesting! I'd like to see more of this, so good luck with writing and i hope you will update soon!

So... Hakuryuu is one of those knights huh?