huh.

huh.

sigh. Lola. Sigh.

"I might tap her though..." Coulson mused.
"For the team", my ass. That was a Freudian slip...

It's really interesting seeing the events from Sitwell's POV. He's not fleshed-out at all in the series, so there was a lot of potential to play with here. You did a really good job of it!

Just imagining Fury saying, "Brave, brave Coulson. You shall not have died in vain," in John Cleese's voice. *Giggles*

That was a great chapter! Good job balancing the overall dark tone with those flashes of humor ("could be a bilgesnipe...") that make the MCU so enjoyable.

Scenario #1: Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Coulson just shot HIMSELF because he didn't know the business end of the alien gun. Am I right? Cause if so, that's hilarious! *hides so Coulson can't find her*

Scenario #2: Okay, that one made my heart twinge a bit. Poor Coulson. He tried so hard to live. :(

Scenario #3: Whoops. Tehe! You NEVER wanna hear that from a villain. *chuckles*

Scenario #4: I. Hate. Fury. I hope Odin poops on him. Yeah, i went there. Grrrr.

Scenario #5: Ahahaha! Coulson blew himself OUT of the carrier. Classic.

Scenario #6: Not sure I like the ending line, but I like this scene. Loki's all confident he's bested Coiulson (fool), and then Coulson just blasts him away. Nice.

Scenario #7: *dies laughing* Oh poor, poor Coulson. Loki's trying so hard. I just can't. I'm so glad I'm not Coulson. It'd stink to be stabbed that many times.

Scenario #8: But this is way REALLY happened, folks. Tehe! Yeah, I can see Fury getting the idea for the cards from Coulson's last dying wishes. Evil man, Fury.

well that was enjoyable. sheesh crazy stuff but yeah. Loki on your not THAT different...lolol.

I got some serious Monty Python vibes from this chapter - you had me in stitches! Thanks for this.

Oh Fury...your heart's in the right place, but...*sighs* I dunno. I still might not forgive you totally for doing that to Coulson. Not that I hate that Phil's alive or anything. Just...yeah...mixed feelings.

Great chapter! :D

Awesome, the part where Coulson punched him in the eye cracked me up haha
And that chapter with May was cool :)

yeah it speaks volume on successor. that is its own... thing on belief and lineage seprate from your self. you got to wonder on the Fury cause at the same time it makes me bleed for him and COOL for him levelly when aware of what ype of guy your dealing with, not hate or pity just.. that is the nature of the beast, I know it better know... what am I to do?

still I like his own version of... unaceptible I have WAYS and feeling like hes just hobiling along... yeah. but belief in what it could be and seeking out ways seprate from himself...
I know therapy is used as a magic thin in stories or stuff but its an exercise in some stuff and god DAMM but the world has never met a man more in need, and less likely to gain the effect needed than him. or well hes in short company at least.
most of them interacting with him day to day!
the therapist is actually another human trying their best is its own thing that.. YEAH.

Nice. You've done the personalities here really well.

So you've read rtsteward's work too, huh? I caught the Pevensie reference.

Oh yes, Hill, he probably would...if he thought you useful enough. Ugh! I've never hated Fury as much as I did when the whole Tahiti thing was uncovered. It actually made me wish he'd died in Captain America 2. Truly, it did. That was just not right, Fury, not right at all. I can only imagine what the Avengers would do, if they ever found out...whaaaa? No, I'm not insinuating they find out...never...okay, a little...a lot?...fine, make them find out and whipped Fury's butt into the next eon!...and then some. Grrrr!

Wait, what do you mean "Orders from higher up."? Who ordered Fury? I didn't remember anything about this