Love it so far! You did great with the dialog. Can't wait for the romance to really take off. And Jack is a dick. 24/7

I love this so much and how you write Jack and yusei and how you know they love each other but they have a hard time facing it and I just can't express my love for this story.

aRE YOU kIDDINg ME ! i NEED MORE please update, I've been searching for story such as this, and your writing skills are great pleaaseee continue!

Wow! That was really amazing, I thought your english was great! Can't wait to read more! Keep on writing, cause it is very good!

I always associated the head mark with Yusei because he seems like the one everyone goes to and the leader.
Nice chapter.

Funny how easily this adapts to romance, eh? ... or not. ;) Nice chapter.

Jack what are you doing!? Just letting someone else flirt and touch your man? He needs a good kick in the ass, lol. Great update, and of course I'll be patiently waiting for more.

I like it!

I like it! More please! _ (Nasty Kalin/Kiryu...)

First, I'd like to say congrats on your first multi-chapter story! I'm writing three multi-chapters and I'm still nervous! Of course I'm ecstatic to see another Kingcrabshipper, and one who writes so well. I'm glad someone sees the potential in this pair. *so sexy*
The prologue was great and I can tell that it's going to be a great start from here on out! I've always thought that Yusei admired Jack as a child as well, so I'm happy to see that someone else does too. Also, if you hadn't mentioned your native tongue wasn't english I wouldn't have even noticed! You write it very well and I'm impressed. It's certainly easier to speak than write so kudos to you. All in all the chapter was great and I can't wait for more. :)