Reviews for Forsaken Scion
Isa ceballos chapter 10 . 8/11
Está buenísimo pronto ACTUALIZACIÓN
Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 8/5
MPREG! Theoretically. Originally, I thought Harry was just Severus's from another woman, possibly Bella or another DE. Might even be from a revel victim since the conception sounded traumatizing and Poppy made noises about Lily not seeming to fit post pregnancy expectations.

But then Albus keep implying the conception/truth to be traumatic enough for even Severus, Hogwarts reknowned trauma survivor, to develop retrograde amnesia well, dub con was on the table and magic is not rational. I thought it would be a DE still, or even Tommy old boy, but then James enters the picture and goes berserk on Lily. Hence, Harry is still a Potter(?). Although if true, ironically, Lily was the one that signed the birth certificate while James hadn't. Also, Harry still does have his mother's eyes.

Maybe Lily made that one popular as personal reminder of Harry's parentage. Or maybe my originally theories had more merit. I think my mpreg theory is still fun though. XD
lindsey21412 chapter 8 . 6/14
I just found this story and am very impressed by your writing! The depth of the insight into mental health and reactions to trauma is insightful and I’m enjoying the development of Severus’s character as well as his flaws. Thank you for an interesting new take on a Severitus story!
Maya chapter 10 . 6/8
wow,wow,wow, Potter Padre es un maldito desgraciado que abuso de Snape?! -
por los Calzones de Merlín, Mi querido Snape esta a punto de ver al universo desde la otra punta.
porfa vor no dejes de terminarlo.
LadyThatReadsNaked chapter 10 . 5/22
Please finish it
Moonsoulx3 chapter 10 . 5/17
Oh my god!
It ended there!
I think my mind snapped!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/15
I like this fic.
mandancie chapter 10 . 5/15
Dun dun dun! Oh the cliffhangers! I am sorry for the lack of reviews. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. Something tells me that Severus is going to find out something that is going to rattle him to the core
Erielaw chapter 9 . 5/7
Glad you’re back posting this story!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/6
Harry Potter is an adult and a parent and he has been for years. Read Rowling. This writer is living in the past.
Callandra Marie chapter 9 . 5/1
Wow what a great update and what a joy it was to reread this! I never mind when things go a long time without being updated, because then I end up rereading the story in entirety and its almost like finding it again for the first time. I am so glad you updated though, and plan to continue. This is such an interesting, compelling, and well done story and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/1
Huh.
CutseyRitska chapter 9 . 4/30
Omg you're back! Loved this chapter, can't wait for another. Glad the pandemic has brought forth some beauty in the form of your writing again. :)
Lunacom chapter 9 . 4/30
Thank for the update!
Anonymous chapter 8 . 7/19/2019
Hey, I know it’s been forever since you wrote this and you might not even visit this site but I just wanted to let you know you much I appreciated the start of this story. It goes in a different direction than most severitus fan fictions do. I like the amount of emotional depth that you see Severus displaying as well as how intricate everyone’s reactions are. The fact that this is occurs during first year offers a better perspective than I feel many of the other fanfics do. Anyway, I’m not expecting that you’ll update this but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed what you have published.
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