I love it! But I would like if Pitch likes Elsa but Elsa doesn't really like him

OMG! This chapter almost made me start bawling my eyes out! But it's the sign of a truly talented author when they can make their readers have such a strong reaction to the story. 3 3 3 So far I'm loving it! 3 3 3

I read the whole story fr 1 pm to 7 09 pm and this is amazing! I love it so much

Damn just convert Pitch for the better and he could be Cupid

Now this, this is Jelsa done right. Tears have been spilled. Also: you want to know my least favorite part? When it ended. :)

Wait... So Elsa will always have that's black strand of hair?
I'm assuming it goes away... Eventually.
Awesome story though! You're writing is great, combined with all the discription and character thoughts and... So many things! Just know, it's absolute awesomeness. Keep it up!

Didn't Jack die in a frozen pond in Burgess just some distance away from Jamie's house..? and that his descendants would technically not be his directly but from his little sister so technically, they should look like her and not him? xD I still vote Jamie as his great-great-great-grand nephew! XD

Aww.. Pitch couldn't help but check on his Elsa. That's kind of sweet.. and sad.. and beautiful. It's probably my most favorite part of the Epilogue despite the barest of interaction between them. It's quite significant. Loved it. :D I'm still going with fatherly affection with this pair.

Thanks for sharing this story! :)

This Alyssa.. I think she may be related to Elsa.. or more specifically.. Anna.. XD

That kid is naive. Let me tell you that. XD

Oww.. Let's all cry now in the corner. A-M on the left side and the rest follow mo over to the secluded area over at the right wall.. QQ

One-sided ToothJack?

If dark goes well with cold.. I can't say the same for teeth and cold. Dentin hypersensitivity anyone? xD

Elsa is getting to Pitch.. XD

What if this was MiM's plan all along? Sly bastard.

Keep Pitch in the dark?

I like the plan Elsa. It would be nice to pull it off.. xD

Oww.. Poor Jackie. Pretty emotional night he's been having..

BTW, since Elsa made a little winter Wonderland near the forest in Burgess, wouldn't the kids in the town find it somehow and render all of Pitch's effort from the night before moot? xD

Waaah! This is exciting news! They finally meet. I really laughed when Elsa looked back to see if Jack was looking at some else behind her. A sense of deja vu miss match? xD

I bet despite the ordeal with the icy nightmare sands, MiM was giggling himself wet. xD

MiM accusing Jack? I would think it more of a guilty look from him.. Never bothered warning a day old fledgling to be wary of things that lurk in the dark.. xD