This was actually a story with a good beginning, middle, and end. I thought it was just gonna be all sex but it had an interesting story. And there were lots of tense moments. Good job.

Just read the whole thing. It was amazing.

i dont want to know how your brain work but keep up at it

Not many people understand that bad pacing bad writing is bad pacing bad writing... preference is not the problem it's the purpose of the story...

If you're not into BDSM, don't read this. It's slow, repetative and has no satisfying conclusion until the VERY END.

As for you, Mmmph... You need to learn a thing or two about PACING. This entire story has the pacing of an ant pushing a brick across a desert. Take away the BDSM, and this story is filled with so much NOTHING. Honestly, it would have worked if this were a lemon story and you filled all that nothing with smut. But as it stands, this story is one of the most aggrivatingly drab things I have ever read. Luckily, it appears there's already a crowd of reviewers who agree.

*we all start booing and throwing tomatoes*

:') loved it all

The total lack of sympathy or even a sign of compassion made me unable to read any further. It is a story of slavery and sexual abuse. I personally cannot see romance in that.

That last review was meant for this chapter

Oh I thought they were going to do it jesus style like pound the spikes into his hands and feet

HOLY SHIT

A great story full of romance, action, and heart. I have never read a better Zelda fanfiction.

Christ, what the fuck is wrong with the gerudo...?

... *saves to favorites folder*

It dragged on too long I'm no longer interested and I'm not reading the last chapter I'm sorry it was good though it just no longer held my internet at how repetitive it was

Way to go Link! Give her a fight!