I think this is so cute! Very in character and very simple :) I love the way it's written and I really can't wait for the next chapter cuz this is just so cute :D

Pretty solid start, really thought the Sogeking backpack was a nice touch.

It's alright, I think that this chapter is absolutely amazing. I love how you made it so that Ace is all blushy blushy and Nojiko is all smirky smirky and Luffy is a dummy dummy. Thank you for writing this!

How adorable. I noticed that it may take place in the real world. I like the story. Hopefully theres a timeskip and stuff and it turns out to be AcexNojiko and LuffyxNami •