Please Update Soon!

Cliff!? Oh please continue the story soon! I want to know what happens next!

Hmm, Anakin has got to be really careful. The first thing he needs to do is kill Cad Bane.

Very GOOD

This was a believe able alternative to events in the film. And well if anything it was better than Attack of The Clones.

Ha! Good one, 3PO! Very excited for the update. Can't wait to see what you have in store next!

So, Anakin doesn't know what to make of Qui-Gon's appearance. One question, when will Ahsoka make her appearance? She would calm Anakin down considerably. In fact Anakin would probably cry with joy when he sees her.

This is great!

Order 65 is in order.

Interesting. I liked the first chapter the best, although the drivel about Mace Windu turning to the dark side was utter nonsense. His fighting-style allows for aggression, as is stated in canon sources, but he's mastered it. I'd cut that. Frankly, instead of having Mace Windu relent and let his guard down, you should have just had Anakin allow Mace to kill Palpatine. Much simpler. Or, better yet, have Anakn kill him himself and fulfil the prophecy.

Another thing, it's Coleman Jack, not Kcaj, and he died on Geonosis.

Otherwise, good story. Keep it up! :)

I wonder how this will affect the CIS with "Sidious" imprisioned.

I'm glad Obi-Wan is going to help. This is all he truly needed; someone to help rather than tell him not to form attachments. Anakin will always form attachments.

Amazing! You should work on descriptive details for example, "There was blood pouring my face. My vision went blurry. Then I blacked out

Gotta love the pacing of this story.

Hmmm the Republic is breaking into chaos. I think Anakin needs to take Padme and just run. It's still too dangerous for him at the moment.