Reviews for We All Have Our Secrets |
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![]() ![]() keep updating this story i love it xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it! Would you please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you continue this please? ITs really good so far and I want to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This will be a great story please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE please |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this is awesome please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, nice. So is there more? |
![]() ![]() Love ittt! I need more! |
![]() ![]() plz update soon I love the concept of the story and would love to read more x |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent first chapter and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okey, so I'm starting with the good stuff. I love your story and I think it has real potential. I really hope you continue it! There are some flaws to the writing though. For example "herd" is actually spelled "heard", I saw you make that mistake a lot so I wanted to tell you. You also missed commas, dots etc. at some places. I suggest you either get a program to edit your texts or a betareader, I got one for my story and it improved my writing so incredibly much. A beta really helps and it's always good to have an extra pair of eyes take a look at it. I mean no offence with this and I hope you don't take it that way. But how can anyone better themselves (including me, my writing is flawed as well) if no one say anything? Again! I really loved the story of it though and I hope to see more if it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going. I like it so far |
![]() ![]() Love it update soon x |
![]() ![]() update faster |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you post more! |