I'm not even into Twilight anymore, but this is one of the ones I have to keep up with :D Love it! I'm so happy you're updating it! :D

That was a great update. You really got all the emotions and conflicts Bella was going through in the story. My breath caught while wondering what she was going to do or what was going to happen. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next update.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Lose ...I really do wish you would have had fairy boy killed off since the only ones to miss him would be mommy and daddy and they don't really count.
So who will it be that turns her I wonder?

Nice to see an update! QuestionIf Jasper will indeed be her mate, presumably it will be a true mate bond (as he’s in a chosen bond with Alice). However, if it’s a true mate bond, then why wasn’t it felt by either party when she was human? If as a human she could feel other bonds to vampires (familial and vassal), as well as a chosen mate bond to Edward (that is still there but negative), then she should have been able to for sure feel a true mate bond.

Thanks. Can’t wait to see more again!

hell no i did not forget this story.. and just sat up till 5 am re-reading it.. glad to see more ...

I was so pleasantly surprised to see that this story was updated! I love Bella's relationship with Alec and Jane, as well as how you portray Bella's newborn instincts and emotions. I hope you continue to update this story!

definitely haven't forgotten this story, I did re-read it from start and this still has to be 1 of my bella, Jane and alec stories

3 waiting for this will always be worth

This was so interesting! I can’t wait for more. Originally I was wondering if Aro would’ve been her mate because of the way that “chosen mate” was introduced regarding his mate before she was changed and the fact that she’s not sure how she feels about him yet due to his mask. I’m interested to see how it will be continued.

As of now, I don’t know how it would work with Jasper since even though it’s only chosen mates and not true mates, he was still together with Alice, her best friend/sister for so long (and this story focuses a lot on bonds). Plus, even though it was in self-defense, he used his power to return the feelings to Jane, and she cares a lot about Jane.

Personally, I like rare pairings like Garrett/Volturi/Alastair/Peter/Emmett/wolf-that’s-not-Jacob/or women with Bella. Either way, I can’t wait to read more and see how it goes!

This is spectacular I hope you update it. Definitely one of my favorites!

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Totally fricking awesome bloody brilliant thank you for this amazing tale of awesomeness can't wait to see Bella 's reaction to Jane in pain so funny thanks for this amazing tale

This is pretty good, I like the stuff about chosen mates, and true mates and things, as in Canon, Edward leaving makes zero sense and is a bit stupid as If Bella was really his mate he wouldn't leave.

The stuff about bonds is interesting as well, some of the formatting, and spelling etc needs work, like you kept writing audition rather than audience in one bit.

But overall good story.

I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT!
I love it when fanfic authors notice that Jasper's power is more powerful than Jane's-and he could make her feel the same pain that she inflicts on others.
Poor, poor Jane. Will Bella and Alec notice that she's in pain? Is that how the bonds work? How will Aro react?
What did Alice see when Jane came in the throne room? Did she see how hurt Bella was?
I love how Jane and Caius dislike the Cullen's. I can't stand them myself (well, Edward, Esme, and Carlisle to be exact-Edward being too arrogant and controlling and Esme and Carlisle being to weak to lead the coven/family, always bending to Edward's will).
I know Bella forgave Alice quickly because of the bond but I hope she doesn't forgive the rest of the Cullen's so quickly.
I can't wait to read more!
Will Aro find out about Victoria, now that Carlisle is there for him to read? How will the kings react?
I'm loving this fic. I can't wait to read more.