| Reviews for Hum of a Heartbeat |
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   theelephantintheroom chapter 4 . 4/10/2016 I'm interested in where this would go. Seeing Bart become less innocent in pastfuture, paralleled with him dealing with his trama is a great storyline start. Oh and the mystery of what happens when they turn 13, taken away for testing/slavery? This is a really good look at barts psychology. I'd love to see more of one of your hiatus stories. Or anything new you write :D |
| TaekwondoAssKicking chapter 4 . 12/17/2015 Love it! Though, you should make it so that everyone else have no idea the future they just dodged . . . add more drama and stuff . . . hehe I'm evil. Keep up the awesome good work! :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/17/2014 Oh man, Im glad you updated! Hope you keep writing this story |
| FlightfootKeyseeker chapter 4 . 7/13/2014 I'm amazed that Bart is allowed this much freedom. I'd think that the Reach would want anyone who was able to work for them. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/24/2014 Oh nice you updated! I hope you keep going with this story. I am interested in seeing where you go with it. Bart does have family and friends in YJ, but it must be rough carrying the burden of memories that will never come to be/making sure that it doesnt happen or isnt forgotten, and mourn people he will never see again (even if they are alive but it isnt the same since the events that shaped them dont happen). |
| PainInSilence chapter 3 . 5/24/2014 Awww.. please update ! |
| Sora chapter 3 . 5/24/2014 Well you and your writing I've said it before you just write Bart wonderfully and your descriptions, I really enjoyed this chapter it was so bitter in a sense or at least I get that from Bart and his loneliness. Thanks for posting Sora |
| TheHeroicAmerica chapter 2 . 4/27/2014 I'm cry |
| Sonorous Scripter chapter 2 . 4/27/2014 I really like this fanfic. I don't think I've read any that go so in depth with Bart's past. Good job. |
| Sora chapter 2 . 4/27/2014 Well you do not disappoint again great writing and Meloni is it as Bart's mum I think she is in the flash comics but anyway another good chapter, I'm curious to see where this is heading but I love your description of Meloni's and Jaime's eyes. Thanks for posting Sora |
| orsumfenix chapter 2 . 4/27/2014 I'm really liking this so far! |
| TheHeroicAmerica chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 I love this! |
| Sora chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 This was so wonderfully written in character and the plot is great, I loved the descritions it really made me feel about the debris and poor Bart, but you do write him wonderfully. Thanks for posting, Sora. |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 Why doesn't this have more reviews? It's awesome! |
| partlysunny chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 Great work! Thank you! |
