This was great, until is wasn't.

I was totally smiling and giddy. Happy for the couple and then that bomber. Damn...and after everything on the show to.
Your writing is great, that's for sure and I did enjoy the story. Kudos to you for a great story

There is a tag for Tragedy, it's better to warn readers of a Major Charater Death. People will stop reading your works if they feel like they are being tricked into reading it. Just a suggestion :)

Bummer

Love this, so well written, felt you got the characterisation of both Daryl and Beth spot on. I was so happy for them and wanted more, then she dies... kudos to you for being brave enough to write an ending that won't be popular with a lot of people (just hope they don't follow suit on the show) ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO omg :'( did not see that ending coming, i'm gunna cry! This was beautifully written, amazing job!

Just devastating

Oh my sweet lord... How could you do that?;! :'(
it was such an epic change of emotions! When Rick was talking to him I was wearing my biggest smile, but then when it all became bad I was literally in tears!
it was awesome... So sad! But awesome!

Loved it! Sad ending..

You made her DIE!? I really liked this but dang it!

He died does not have that stay together lack them much to spend
So you can not finish

Very well written but awful sad. :(

Well written.

Awe, kind of wish I had an angst warning. This was sad.