| Reviews for Betrayed |
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   sakarrie chapter 2 . 6/17 Definitely appreciated the second chapter! Great work! |
| BurnedMiw chapter 2 . 5/1/2018 Lovely story, Could have done with little more grovelling on Arthur's part |
| secret-identity-revealed chapter 2 . 4/20/2016 please please please continue! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2015 Your story summary should read WILL MERLIN forgive Arthur. Arthur the stupid betrayed prat is angry cuz of something his friend was born with. Idiot |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/12/2015 Amazing. Merlin is a doormat. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 Can you please rebuild trust slowly? And maybe show that even Merlin sort of reached his limit and there was never that blind loyalty and faith and he was more withdrawn and aloof? Please. I hate fics where he completely bounces back like a puppy eager to serve its master. It's sickening. |
| Argetaie chapter 2 . 2/19/2015 At least the end was optimistic xD Well, it was a fine storey. Very good. Sad, but good :) |
| NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 2 . 1/26/2015 Very nicely done, although the end turned around a bit faster than seemed realistic, even for Arthur and Merlin. Thank you for posting! |
| Britt30 chapter 2 . 1/26/2015 Good ending, though I can't help feeling there could be some problems with Uther later on. Anyway, thanks for writing this and have a fantastic day! |
| Britt30 chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 Ouch. Oh, ouch. Arthur giving him to the bandits and then the "I have no need of him." Gosh, if anything were to break Merlin it would be that. Also, love the tidbits you put in from the magic book. |
| Dinogeek chapter 2 . 10/1/2014 Do you do deaf ed? Cause that's actually really similar to how someone interprets for deaf-blind people except they usually used the sign letters and let the other person feel them. Also I'm glad you let yourself get bugged into doing a second chapter. I'm an absolute sucker for happy endings and chapter one definitely did NOT have one of those. O-o Okay, I'll shut up now. Good job! - |
| aRangersHorseLovesApples chapter 2 . 5/12/2014 I liked the ending :) |
| oma13 chapter 2 . 5/12/2014 Oh, thank you! This last chapter was brilliant! Just what we needed! I much prefer this to being left to 'let our imaginations finish the story'. I'm so glad you gave us this. It was wonderful to experience Merlin's fear and anguish and Arthur's trepidation and confusion all finally leading to their healing. Great job. Loved it. |
| Mika271170 chapter 2 . 5/12/2014 Thank you for your decision to write a kind of epilogue,it was great! |
| ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 2 . 5/12/2014 Woo! Good stuff, I'm so glad you did the second chapter. A good finish point too. |
