astrid smirking at her boyfriend hiccup hey stay in one place

Simplemente hermoso.
Como fuiste contando los cambios del pensamiento de astrid por hipo desde niños hasta adolescentes.
Como fueron floreciendo esos sentimientos y como los negaba hasta lo inevitable.
Te felicito, una gran historia.

Mistake: not "leanguage", but "language", in the Author's Note asking people to do this

very nice. Good job

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I like this take on the two. It's nice to see a sort of slow build up to them as a couple.

Very nice fic. Most of the words and grammar were correct... Way better than my Spanish! Lol Nice job.

This is a beautiful story, and deserves way more credit than its been given.

Very sweet concept seeing this from Astrid's POV. I can tell you tried hard with the English, it's not bad at all! The scene with Astrid getting her axe sharpened reminded me of the deleted scene from HTTYD1, where something similar was planned.

Oh my gooness! This is magnificent!

I really enjoyed your story. There were a few errors in the writing, but for a second language it was very nicely done.

- Oh, there's that sweet ending I was hoping for. I really liked the pacing in this, very touching.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

It is spelled language

Nice little retrospective there.

Falling in love...

Past Astrid: If I ever did THAT I think I'd have a heart attack!
Me: SPOILER ALERT: You end up falling in love with Hiccup and become his long-time girlfriend!