Then just drop it if it's becoming a chore. People helping u can create Thier own which hopefully won't be 90 percent copy and paste canon like this. What's the point of making a harem when MC will forever be a virgin.

Could just focus on becoming proficient with powers. Forshadowing that some more people from elemental nations will make it to this verse is off putting. Naru verse chakra trump's any power in freezing verse. Period.

I really liked this series I spent a few days going through it during my breaks at work got to say... Time well spent. The story really grabbed my attention and kept me interested. Can't wait for when this pick back up. I will admit the skit of Sakura beating up Sasuke because she could beat up naruto made me laugh.

forget hinata just get it on freezing girls

I liked the chapter.

I found your fanfic through a Naruto/Arnett art over at DeviantArt, and I have to say this has been a very interesting read for me. I had not ever seen the Freezing anime, and I read this fic before I had searched for the anime to check it out. I really love the interactions between Naruto and the Padoras, resulting in him gaining a harem of ladies who are interest in him. :)

Yet with you had written the only seasons of Freezing, I wonder what you will write next? I look forward to what you can write for the next arc of this fic. :)

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I hope those two actually become friends and Nero(?) doesn't rat on him

I like Satellizer better...

His sister is turning into a hypocrite and maybe a tad bit... yandere

I still think drama like what arnet is going through is stupid and, pretty mucb, unnecessary but thats only my opinion oh and in that part where naruto got kneed in the gut instead of spitting blood, which is unreasonably considering his durability should be higher, it would ave been better if he just spat because of the strength behind it, atthe same time he was kicked, or hi could have spat some vile, well yeah... I admit that I don't know much about freezing since It's been a couple years since I watched it but shouldn't naruto be stronger physically, since you said arnett is stronger physically than him, I mean the energy he has should have boosted his bady, even passively, and his training, workouts, from shinobi acadamy should have helped his bodies strength(?)

before arnets part of the chapter instead of 2 years before he goes to the academy it should be one right? I mean wasn't she 2 yearsolder than him? and a year passed since she left for the academy... soo, anyways I was just pointing out I could be wrong for all I care

wtf? wasn't she like 10, 11 years old and the "thugs" were thinking about having fun?

where is the next chapter of this story please

¿Naruto?¿características asiáticas?
¿estas en drogas?

wow this chapter made me quit this serie ...

he has sexualy harassed her for allmost all her life and done everything to her exept raping her
yet now naruto is like OMG you said your sorry ? alright then lets forget about everything lets make rainbow and sunshine togheter hey but next time you try to rape or somthign just make sure you regret it everything is a okay then ..

jesus fucking idiot