Hi I really like your story just wisb that u would
Writing some more I really want to know if ichigo falls in love with kisshuand I think that its sweet that pai is thinking of lettuce

Where is your chapter 9 ? I really hope that u will finish it .Because its a really good story I just love read it

I love your story

ah! continue please! i wanna know what happens!

AWW Taruto is so cute! :3
Kisshu needs to stop the awkward comments... XD
The story is awesome ;)

Well .. I really like your fanfic! I of course I read it and translate it for good is something difficult but I am intrigued and want to know a lot ... more ! Continuous soon please :) see you soon!

Oh God! you write amazing! i love your fanfics 3, you know how create a good idea , but maybe the others Mews should appear in 4 or 5 chapters more, cause they create a break in the story in Cyniclonia, just a idea :) And please update soon! i cant wait to read the next chapter (and obviously i want to know what happened in Kisshus room)! Ps. another thing than for me is pretty important, i think Ichigo should be a long time in Cyniclonia (a few months or a year maybe) cause that time could create more romance situations for Ichigo and Kissh 3... and yep that is all .
Bye Bye! and dont forget update soon please :) can wait!

I can't wait for chapter 9!

Aw...Poor Ichigo...She doens't seem to be enjoying this very much.
Oh and it was a great chapter!

I don't see anything wrong with this chapter, it was amazing just like your other chapters. So well done writing it!
PS. That was a nice landing (!)

Yooooo, this was awesome. No gramatical or spelling errors as far as I can find. You've really improved since the first chapter and it can only get better from here. Soon you'll be making novelists jealous of your writing skills! If I had to suggest something (don't mark me on this, it may be there already and I just can't see because mobile is horrible) but you should indicate where scene transitions are (like when it jumps from Ichigo and the aliens to Cafe Mew Mew) by doing the line thing authors do somehow in the FF editing thing or skipping a line and putting dots or writing "elsewhere" or something. Because (as I can see anyway) it's just like BAM transition. I love the fluff in this chapter and can't wait to see what comes next! XD

eres pervertida amiga quizas mas que yo y yo me refiero a la parte de kishigo en la cama
kish: july que estas pensando
july: yo nada
kish: entonces porque estas roja
july: por nada

Yay! Update! I liked it a lot, even the cliffie!

Yaaay! Sorry I didn't review earlier, my computer's all busted and I'm not sure when/ if I can fix it. Either way this story is so awesome and I cannot wait for the next installment. Glad no one's hurt anyway, and I smell romantic tension brewing

I just wanted to say that the alien's names are often confused, you can spell them like "Kisshu, Kish or Quiche", "Pie or Pai" and "Tart or Taruto" but I think none of them are wrong :)