They're so cute together here.

I really like the section you have here where Beth says to Daryl if this is all a dream and none of the good things to do with them finding each other and their family again really happening then "you'd better find me."

I like how Beth make up a pretend scenario and how they'd have met in a normal world here, even arguing about the details like that.

They're so cute together.

Great chapter. Loved it!

Daryl saying that aloud here is so cute somehow. I guess because he's quite a closed down sort of person generally speaking.

I love what Beth says to Randall here. Strong words.

Wow! What a great ending of this chapter - and some heavy conversations going on prior to that.

Tough chapter to read, but really well written.

This is a great story! I particularly liked this chapter.

Absolutely adore this story!

Wonderfully written and perfectly suspenseful

I loved thisa great story, though I kinda want a more complete ending lol. but that's just me all in all though, the action was great, the plot was great. excellent job!

Cool story, I just read the whole thing... only downers were some grammar issues mainly with "their, they're and there" if you want to brush up on your knowledge of that- self improvement and all. Or you can just disregard my constructive feedback...

that's it please continue, this is amazing