you are not a terrible writer. this is pretty well done in my opinion. I like how its going. and I'm excited to read more.

Nice update. Looking forward to see how the date goes

It's a little trite, but I kinda really friggin like that. I like that he freaked out and went full Dick Van Dyke chasing her, and how neither of them know what they're doing. I'm excited to see what happens! I've never smiled so much lol

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Love it! cant wait for another chapter!

I just found your story and I love it next chapter please

Guest Thank you for your review. I previously mentioned when I first uploaded the first chapter, that this fic is loosely based off a book that I've read. Firstly, I'd like to address your questions about Draco. For the crap move, I'm actually writing that into the third chapter presently. I completely agree with you. If I were Hermione, I wouldn't forgive him either. As for finding her parents when Voldemort couldn't, this fic completely ignores certain things in the books. I've got plans to clear things up in future chapters (provided I stay interested in updating haha).

As for the Ron thing. This is also how the book I read kind of went, BUT! fear not! Ronald is going to show up in future chapters as well (I'm currently writing like four different chapters lol), and that maturity from the last book is going to show up. Ron is going to do a complete 360. I actually like Ron, and though I don't really ship Romione, I still appreciate them as a canon couple. I'd also just like to say, I pointed this out in the author's note, I'm a terrible writer. I'm awful. Some things aren't going to make sense. I don't have a beta to help out, so for now it's just me and my brain, which heavily follows the stream of consciousness. I really don't mean to demean Hermione's intelligence, but I'll try to be better. Thank you again for your review though!

What the hell is wrong with Draco? He took a private moment that Hermione needed to do for herself because he thought he could get her to forgive him that way, turned her moment of weakness into something he could exploit? WTF? I'm not surprised Hermione doesn't forgive him. He's a bastard and he should know that.
And how would he even find the Grangers? She only told Harry and Ron. Even Voldemort couldn't find the Grangers and somehow Draco did?

And another story where Ron cheated. Sure, Draco could grow up, but it's okay to write Ron and excluded all his maturity in the last half of the last novel. Hypocrite much? Couldn't you just write that Hermione and Ron are too different and they decided to part way? Why do you need to demean Hermione's intelligence by writing Ron like an idiot?

good start - please use an easier to read format