Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() this might be my favorite bellarke fanfic ive ever read. almost in tears at the end :)) |
![]() ![]() This is an amazingly written story, i can't stop reading hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW that was one of the most beautiful stories I’ve ever read and the fact that it’s a bellarke story only makes it even more amazing ️great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've got to admit, I really don't get it. Clarke is supposed to be the smart and reasonable one, right? So, how come she is so much more preoccupied by people's opinions about her and Bellamy instead of Murphy's acts? Shouldn't she think first about how he could still be able to steal from them even though they tightened their patrol and security instead of just dismissing it as someone not being careful enough? The people whom are patrolling are after all already aware about Murphy and are on high alert. Even I could think of several hypothesis right off the bat. 1. If their patrol is just keeping guard over the gates then maybe Murphy found a way in that doesn't involve the gates. Another opening due to the malconstruction of the wall or maybe he even found a way to create an opening. 2. If there is no one patrolling inside their territory then maybe he is pulling a Lincoln/grounder move and climbing trees. Since they do live in a forest than there is no way that there no branches above the wall that could help him access the inside. 3. Do they only patrol during the night? What about during the day, when people are coming and leaving through the the gates like a windmill? Even if there is probably a lot of people still inside, if he is stealthy enough he could pull it off, especially if no one is wiser. 4. He has help from the inside. #traitor, #allies But anyway, other than that, I really am enjoying this fic for now, good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never left a review before but this story was so perfect that I just had too! I loved this story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the first bellarke stories I've ever read and I never got to leeave you a review... So I just am. And you rock ! |
![]() ![]() Literally read the whole thing in one lol absoultley amazing, your suck a Talented writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! The adorable moments kept making me grin like an idiot. And you also managed to balance the tension with the cuteness, making a very effective and well rounded plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a touching story! Ot was amazing and well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep writing for the 100- you're SO good at it. Such a fan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is this so adorable? thank you for making this great story even tho i havent been through the whole trip, i just caught up and it has been a great night reading this. so thank you. I really needed some peace with bellarke, so I am glad that you are such a great writer! ( btw if you really like doing something keep doing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved this whole story. I just found it ( I'm a little slow lol) but it was worth it. Thank you for writing it and sharing it. |
![]() ![]() This is definitely the greatest fanfiction i have ever read so if you ever do another one about the with kifs i would sooo read. You are an amazing writer this makes me believe in bellarke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I'm glad things ended relatively happy. The story played out pretty differently than what I was expecting but I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad they said it. So much angst though :/ |