Love it.

Firstly, great story! I'm not one for long reviews, so I'll keep this short. You do capture the essence of the story, character development and other things well. However, there are some plot elements that I feel could be touched on more. For example, the immortality. Being immortal and having to live forever, you'd think that it would be touched on more (surprised Eon's not having an existential crisis). During Eon's time in captivity, I don't once see it in the text, something major you'd think would be exploited (Since Team Plasmid's goal is to make new technology for humans, immortality would be huge). At least include Eon's stress over it or something. Despite this, I do still question your decision to rewrite this at only 20 chapters. If you want to rewrite, at least make the readers happy and finish the darn story first... And if you're planning on continuing it in a sequel, same applies. If you're going to leave the story and take a break, at least add it in the editor's notes before you do, so people won't be checking daily for non existent updates. I'd rather you continue the story with these few plot holes and keep the current reader base happy than rewrite and potentially turning devoted fans away. Overall, great story, if not for a few plot holes and other minor details. Keep the current fan base happy and continue the story as it is. Keep up the good work! (so much for a short review huh)

I like this story... *gets out portal gun* time to check out the rewrite! *shoots and teleports into the mass effect dimention* Upps... wrong place :( HALP ME!

I am so glad that you are still updating this (hopefully) can't wait to see him meet up with the other hybrids and I wonder who is captured beside Eon,Xeien, and Exca. (I just reliesed how similar those names are.)

Whoa, this story is still alive! Great to see it coming back. I'll have to re-read it from the start to remember how it goes.

Oh thank goodness. I thought you were dead.
I'm just glad you're still writing and being amazing!

Wonderful chapter. I missed the last update, somehow. Sorry for taking so long with this review.
I'll be sure to watch out for the next chapter eagerly. :).

I love this story, I even got my friend to read it and we can have a conversations about the story for and hour or two. Note sorry if i ruin the twist but i am predicting that Johinko and Darck are brothers and Johinko is jealous of Darck. I hope this story does not become like Phases Of Change because after he got captured it got really boring. Also I hope that this story does not end and continuously have the stuff like battles. Also: I hope after that eon is saved there is a joke where vulcan was visiting his parents the whole time.

I like your story,it's awesome.

Great chapter as always. I'm really excited to see what is going to happen next! I hope eon will be okay...

I love this story it has good character developement and funny jokes i even got my friend to read it multipul times

And here I was thinking that Plasmid had been all but forgotten. I hope they can get all of their fellow Hybrids back ;-;

About freakin' time you updated! I was starting to doubt ;-;
Anyway, awesome chapter with wonderful detail and action. Love it ;)

I love the idea of the scented fire baths for fire type hybrids

Whoa