Reviews for The Legend of Spyro: A New Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Will you update this story again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to have you back Dude I have been with this story for years now I have loved every step of the way keep up the good work. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to go out on a limb here and guess that Spyro and Cynder adopt Lilleth |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been enjoying I'd like to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep on keeping on man, this is a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, buddy, i hope you're going for the better. i'm here til the end pal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you didn't forget about the story. I am looking forward to what you make it in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well my friend, this is quite the extraordinary story you got going here. the adorableness of Lilith is at the max and the average grammar quality does not deter from the amazing quality of the story itself. I am looking forward to the next chapter with much excitement. also, take your time. I don't mind waiting, as long as you don't drop the story and leave us without warning. But seriously. Please don't drop this. it's a great story and I really want to see it finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this a crossover? this is a crossover isn't it? i smell crossover. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i so hope the rest of his tribe gets wiped out. serve him right for such a dirt bag move... that was mean... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, i don't mind the grammar mistakes as they are few and far in-between. The speed is at a perfect pace and the story is freakin awesome! it's funny, suspenseful, adorable, and all around satisfying. please, please keep this going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa. even I found that a little scary. also, waist. not waste. i'll let you find that one :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh trust me, this is so much better than some other stories I've read. You at least give your words some emotion, and there's some actual meat to your story. Yay twelve year old story writing! .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "If you so hope to save her life and your own I would advice you to awaken." should be "If you so hope to save her life and your own, I would advise you to awaken." a minor mistake that I'd thought I'd point out. Minor capitalization errors in there as well, but as I said, only minor. Great intro btw. |