YOU GO GIRL, I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION'S

it is amusing start

you mispelled some words but so far i love this story

Please update

Not everybody I don't like hamburgers

Ok so I voted on Laxus BEFORE reading his and I must say... I really regret it. Please take one vote away from Laxus and add one to Natsu. Please.

I love your story! Although you have previously mentioned your belief that you have been letting the readers down I don't believe you ever were. Watching you grow as a writer throughout your longer stories has been a pleasure and I wish I could send more support. Don't let your writing spirit be held back by the flamers! Your talent (I have found) lies in the unique plot, your ability to capture the feelings of the characters and portray them through your writing, and especially for this story the little details that relate it back to Fairy Tail (ex. sting and rouge being twins but not having the same last name). Write on and know that I am cheering for you :)

Wow. Laxus sure is cocky, and Natsu is waxing poetic in the middle of a classroom and that spells huge trouble for Lucy and nobody else. Holy Cats! I can see the craziness hitting the fan already.

Ah. Now that is a sweet little chapter. I think it is funny that Lucy is caught between two guys who are crazy about her. It is a tough situation when one of them is your new Step brother though. Kind of sucks to be Lucy I suppose. Still, I can see the merits of accepting the best friend of your whole lifetime in a way. Such a relationship would be very stable and would work very well if the sparks start to shine.

Wowsers, so Lucy has Asthma problems it seems. Glad that Natsu knows how to help her in a pinch. So sad that his dad was in a car wreck. Bet that really messes with everyone's head. At least Natsu has friends who see his dad as family.

Pretty darned good chapter overall. Reading is a nice way to wake up in the morning when the story is flowing well.

Oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh laxus is so jello (if anyone know what youtubers say that you a cookie the size of ur face)

Well lalu wouldn't be weird if Ivan fell in love with laxus' mom again and him and Layla just stayed friends :3 then lalu will be ~suppooooooooooooooorted~:3

You know, I'm getting tired of saying this, but I guess I have to again, so here it goes, IT'S NOT INCEST, people! again, THEY'RE NOT BLOOD RELATED! Get that in your little minds! It's just a stupid label that society put, or some jealous bitch that didn't want the guy that he likes to be in love with his not blood related "sister". Anyways, Excellent chapter! I like it! I hope you can update soon! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

I can't believe it! Argh! I hate you right now Laxus! How dare you fuck another girl when you said you love Lucy!? And don't give me that crap of "I wanted to forget her" or "I got frustrated because I can't do anything to her, and that's why I fuck Mira" that's bullshit and you know it! That's not excuse! And now your dad is thinking of sending you away!

Laxus, you baka! You shouldn't taunt Natsu like that! That's only gonna make Lucy mad at you! Remember that they share a special bond, one that you can't easily break, because if you hurt Natsu, Lucy is not gonna forgive you!