OMG! This was so so HOOOTTTT!

FUCKKK... THAT WAS SOOO HOTTT~~ RINHARU FOR LIFE. LOVE THIS COUPLE SOOO MUCHH~~ 3 thank you so much for writing such an amazing fanfic!

Cute... But so fuckin sexy too.

The "green" part, holy shit. It killed me! Haha.
Great fanfiction, really!

... I f**king love you. You write amazing smut. You have a gift, please use it for good. And by that I mean please continue writing this stuff. I'mma follow you now. :3

That escalated quickly! Not that anyone who has read this minds of course. I love how even though they're doing very dirty things Rin is still a sweetheart and wants to make their first time special. I also appreciate the use of lube, because some fics don't seem to get that it's usually necessary. I love Haru's last line, it's so in character.

I like the fact that it’s green rofl. Green is my favorite color. That silence is really awkward, isn’t it? Lol. It’s glow in the dark? Kinky. Rin sure can talk up on a person…he has some serious mack game. Wow, that escalated quickly…this is so intense. Wow, that lemon was amazing –fangirl squeal- that was so sexy…I kind of wanna read it again. Damn…great job! Thanks for sharing this! _

xD Haru that's all you mad about? LOL

omfg yes 3

OMG, that was so hot; awesome work!

3 Spirit

It was so hot and plausible! I hate it when people picture Rin and Haru as wild sex - beasts, they're highschoolers after all, and you did just the right thing! I enjoyed it a lot, thanks. ;)