Loved this story, brilliant

Loved it!

Liked the way you wrote angry Killian. I think he needed to get that out!

emma did want henry, but she wanted him to have his best chance more.
plus she was in a bad place after neal ripped her heart into pieces.
stupid neal!
great writing though!

That was awesome! I've liked every moments of it. I would have love to see that scene but if we do have saw it, the story wouldn't have been the same. So I guess I will have to set for an alternate version :) Anyway, thank you for sharing it! Hope to read something else like this from you someday :D

Kyaaaa! That so cute! I want a Hook!

I really love that. It's well writing and in character. Perfect!

GREAT story - I wish the show had shown something like this. Everyone seemed to be in character so their interactions, reactions, thoughts and emotions, seemed realistic (or as realistic as you're going to get with OUAT). It was nice to explore some of the deeper issues with the characters. Very well done.

you write them really well!

{grins} Awesome way for it all to turn around and give us a WONDERFUL Captain Swan ending for this story. I really loved it!

I really loved this.
They were so ungrateful on this episode! Loved that you sorted all out!
Cheers!

Loved it! I really want tlk to happen in the double on Sunday. I think it will, because both of them are being sent away. It will be the way Emma gets her magic back...
anyway :) thank you for this, it was great

I just loved it!

Your ff makes much more sense then .any of the others I've read. I mean, why would Emma take the risk of losing her magic from kissing him on the lips, when she could just as easily break his curse by kissing him anywhere else.
Love your story. -

Aww this was so sweet! I liked that the Charmings Emma recognised that they were in the wrong and everyone was perfectly in character. I particularly liked Henry's contributions. Very nice, thanks for sharing

Yes they were wrong not to trust him but actually hating them for having a normal human reaction to a person who has double crossed them before like some of the reviewers is a bit extreme. So everyone can make mistakes except Snow and Charming? Not to mention they had the mental anguish of just remembering that Snow had crushed David's heart and he had technically died for awhile. I think they might need to be cut some slack instead of being hated for a misunderstanding.