| Reviews for Flames of the Heart |
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   Jojotheshadow chapter 12 . 6/3 Hope you come back and update this story. |
| JumpatRandom chapter 2 . 3/22 I believe you're still active on the site, so I'll say this: I think you can just rush cheating at the drop of a hat, you could have just simply put how they met and developed on it later. I hate constructive criticism because it's just saying: "Don't do this, do that!" I'm sorry if I'm blunt, but I think this is something you need to hear. This character development was sloppy. |
| thethethex34 chapter 4 . 11/11/2019 Just want to state, in regards to my earlier review, that I don't hate people who are bisexual. |
| thethethex34 chapter 3 . 11/11/2019 To be honest, I am actually rooting for finn to not go back the Flame Princess, and to go meet other people. Maybe he can try it out with Huntress Wizard? Probably not likely in this fanfic, just putting my thoughts out there. Finn and Huntress Wizard is my favorite pairing and it's a bit frustrating when a sizable portion of the fan fictions with this pairing involved either involve a big harem or warp her character til she is nearly unrecognizable, although there are some good ones out there. Im not against harem fanfics, but I get put off when one of the members of a harem is bisexual. It usually leads the fanfic down a weird path when that happens. |
| brandonleewolfe1 chapter 1 . 4/30/2019 Hello are you going to write the next chapter plz |
| brandonleewolfe1 chapter 5 . 4/26/2019 Do you need help or your ok |
| Timeman chapter 1 . 3/18/2019 Keep it going! |
| Timeman chapter 1 . 2/18/2019 Dude keep it going |
| Yo chapter 12 . 1/27/2019 It me that finn hurt Phoebe but it like the opposite phoebe hurt finn hey can you do ice finn meet ice finn you a man need a maid x3 time |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/21/2018 Please do more |
| draco122 chapter 12 . 9/20/2018 That was great. Draco122 |
| et-reader97 chapter 6 . 9/20/2018 Great chapter I think you did a good job on the wedding scen but I do think that you could have went into more detail about the decorations or maybe have Finn put in some "special touches". It would show the time and effort he was willing to put into planning not only Simons wedding but his and flame princess's formerly potential wedding. Keep up the good work. |
| et-reader97 chapter 4 . 9/20/2018 OH how Flame Princess suffers for what she did. I like how you going to have Finn say zap when he freeze's things it was always funny. Keep up the good work. |
| The Book of Eli chapter 12 . 9/19/2018 Finally it has been updated! Anyway I'd say this was a simple and soft chapter. But for the dungeon I say go with a more horror kind of theme. And I hope to see more soon... |
| goddragonking chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:) have u see the end of Adventure Time yet? it was great and Bubbline is real |
