| Reviews for Departed |
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   BigBenEco chapter 7 . 3/24/2017 Great Work! Now having finished reading all your works, I understand, appreciate, and respect your choice of writing style, character development, storyline, and I must give you credit for your work on tackling interesting topics. I think what I really respect is that usually in most stories, usually Beast Boy x Raven, the story revolves around building up to a relationship, and then it ends there. While interesting, I don't want things to end. However, you have spent a lot of time focusing on the story that comes after becoming a couple. I really respect and appreciate being able to read a story where life still goes on and there is still room for growth, especially the slow build up to tackling key ideas. Great work! I am glad to hear that you wrote this with the focus on improving your writing. Not that there is any one best way to write according to rhetorical theory, or that you need to improve, I am just glad to hear another writer who likes to analyze not only the story, but how the story is made and told. Great work! |
| Anarchy chapter 6 . 12/31/2015 That's nice |
| hejk12345 chapter 7 . 10/18/2014 and this one also just finished.:! now for the big cake! |
| I'm a Lover not a Hater chapter 7 . 6/16/2014 That was hot. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/13/2014 update more ! |
| bubbajack chapter 7 . 5/29/2014 Ending it with a lemon or does this only count as a lime? Either way it was a nice way to end a fic. I'm off to read what you have done on the sequel so far now. Again, Great job! -Bubbajack out! |
| Ryuko-Kisaragi chapter 7 . 5/22/2014 I'm not one for reviewing lemon chapters, but this was a rather awesome way to end a prologue to the next story! |
| FF8cerberus chapter 7 . 5/15/2014 He must be going crazy after this. She'll drive him to not think about anything but sex. Not bad. You caught me off guard with this one. Until next time. |
| Skallaken chapter 7 . 5/15/2014 Well, that was really hot. |
| Silvereye-BW chapter 7 . 5/14/2014 Wow...something finally happened. |
| shugokage chapter 7 . 5/14/2014 Nice chapter and good job on capturing Mento difficult personality! |
| Soul Reaper With a Core Drill chapter 7 . 5/14/2014 this was an awesome end to an awesome story and now i cant wait till the next part for this story till next time and good luck with the new story *gets on black motorcycle and drives off* |
| Silvereye-BW chapter 6 . 5/14/2014 Wow things are really heating up. |
| shugokage chapter 6 . 5/12/2014 Nice chapter and good luck on college! |
| Soul Reaper With a Core Drill chapter 6 . 5/12/2014 ... yup no doubt that i will stick with this story till its conclusion and follow in till the next one |
