Sweet little story I like how you go out of your comfort zone and yet remain true to your style! Also nice in staying true to the characters, tho hard to imagine how they would really react this seems pretty close. Especially Gajeel was very spot on. Keep it up I'm proud of you buddy!

PS: sorry I have no real review on it I'm to noob to comment on your writing which I loved btw

Awww another cute story. This was a really fun read, that silly childhood romance feeling :P I like how normal it all feels. And I want his T-shirt. :)

It's been so long since I read this I forgot how adorable this is. Such a lovely little story, and with great writing too. :)

That was so cute!

These stories are sweet and fluffy! I love them.

Fantastic! I love your writing!

So cute

The last line left me speechless.
YES NaLu babies

Aww... Natsu's so sweet

Awwwww! I love every chap! Especially the fifth one! Because I totally agree! Natsu will always be there for Lucy! This is just too sweet! Please update more! XD

Broom love XD ha! Awesome short, as always

Arigatou for the story I PROMISE I'll update Gasoline Fire as soon as I can!

Aw so cute