Dumbledore may have escaped, but I doubt he was unscathed. It might even have killed him.

You know ... I really thought better of Fawkes than that.

Honestly this story got so out of hand that it became unreadable. Theirs no way for lily and James to be alive without anyone noticing it’s just unrealistic. It went from finding a sword to everyone basically starting a riot against Dumbledore.

I give up. It's getting worse. More than half this chapter is author's notes and comments, even worse then previous chapters which were already pretty bad. Not to forget the earlier chapter which was about one third part of ANOTHER STORY in some pathetic puff attempt. This guy is clearly desperate to up his word count.
Don't waste your time.

"We have a lot of walking to do."
And then they're arriving at the Leaky Cauldron. With nothing in between. Are you insinuating that they walked the entire distance? Do you realize that it's approximately thirty miles from Surrey to downtown London? While they could have walked that distance, it would have taken them hours. It would have been much easier to take the bus, or the train. Of course Harry would have required money for tickets to take the bus or train. Still you could have at least given us a clue how they got to London.

Interesting premise.

So wait if they are alive does that mean that Peter gets that money from their will? I mean the rules WERE if they were still alive he would get the money and estate. And if that’s the case how is Sirius off the hook? I mean there’s no proof as of right now that he DIDN’T kill Peter. So he shouldn’t be out of his grim form just yet.

Please tell me he pairs off with Hermione.

Ahahahaha. AU crackfic, my favorite kind of story.

Ouch, ok... I've got to stop reading this. Last chapter was hard, but this chapter... I did enjoy the read until two chapters ago and thank you for that at least.

I have to be blunt with you... this chapter was painful to read. The other chapters have mistakes here and there, but this chapter was by far your roughest one in this story. It feels rushed, and that coupled with the mistakes, I nearly stopped reading a number of times.

Gotta love a jealous Hedwig. Too funny.

I like Hedwig's personality XDDD

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Interesting enough so far. I always like stories where Harry finds items his parents left for him as it makes a great deal of sense. I mean if you were involved in war were you could likely be killed at any moment you would leave behind as much as you could for your child. More so if you know of a literal prophesy stating that they were potentially destined to defeat the antagonists of said war. So yeah a magic trunk full of useful items is a good way to go about it.

Now there are some issues with how quickly Harry falls in with his newly discovered parents, one would think it might take more than a day for the shock to wear off and simply adjust. Then there is how sloppy the hiding and memory charming of James and Lily was. They kept their appearance and their names, there is no way with how famous they are in the magical world that they wouldn't be noticed while in England. Even if they went full muggle, there is enough crossover that someone would have recognized them. Plus if you're blocking and rewriting that many memories it is just silly not to also give them new names while you're at it.