Bad english allert! I apologise dearie :) First of all, I would like to point out that I belong more to a group of quiet readers, so I post my revievs at the end of stories. I've already had the pleasure of getting to know your work in the Lord of the Rings story before, so as soon as I saw the Once Upon A Time story, I knew it would be very interesting and worth reading. Actually, as soon as I saw it, I started to squeal authentically with happiness. The way you describe the events, the characters, the way the dialogues between the characters are conducted is extremely clear and very accurate. Everything is well worked out and well thought out. As soon as I started reading your story, I couldn't stop! I love your OC and the fact that you tied her up with Rumpelstiltskin. In addition, you create unique scenes and stories of characters in general, which is very important to me, because I hate when the authors write the script from the series without adding anything unique and trying to force their OC into the course of events. Ufff i think thats it for now :) May the imagination be with you my dear writer and good luck !:)

Starting to wonder if you've read "Indexing" by Seanan McGuire or the 'Hidden Legacy ' series by Ilona Andrews. Those, and this, are the only places I've seen the Pied Piper written so oc and still be captivating.
Awesome story!

I actually thought Mary Margaret was Piper's sister, but cousin works, too.

Also, there's a decent chance this is a repeat post.

Heh... Up until now, I thought Piper was Snow White's sister, but cousin works, too...

I love this stories they are so great. I have reread them multiple times. I love Rumplestilskin and never wanted him to change and piper is amazing. Thank you so much for writing this.

LOVED this! Omg so good I hated having to stop reading to do other things lol. Cant wait to start the next one!

I can't help but be curious as to what will happen when Key loses his memory. That's gonna hurt poor Piper. I love this story, you are a majestic writer.

What’s your tumblr and btw I love your BOOK

Nice story! I really like Piper and how you blended her into the original scenes. I like how active she is and how protective she is, especially of Pinocchio (I'm also really hoping he doesn't go into hiding in the sequel).

I noticed quite a few typos where you had written the wrong word but only a few handful times.

Great story, I really enjoyed reading it!

Your stories are always so well written and interesting to read. Just happened to stop and read this one and I am not disappointed, really hope you come back to this one would love to read more :)

I reread the series so many times and this chapter where Rumple bottle true love is one of my fav.

I started rereading this series and I have to say that even though I am a HUGE Rumbelle shipper I love your bedtime series. This is the one story that I can read where its Rumple/Gold without Belle being the love interest. I love the whole series and it was amazing how you wrote the story, but also your OC main character. I fell in love with the story from the beginning and like all your stories it is worth a read.

So far I think this story is tied for first place on my OUAT favourite fanfics

Absolutely amazing story!

I disagree with Piper aging, if Regina had cast her out of the town line than she should have been subjected to the curse as everyone else just out of town. But I do like your story, it's well write and entertaining.