Oliver was always so dense that it's not surprising it took something so extreme to get him to realize his true feelings.

I would want to see a sequel and if you still want someone to write with I can help. I have wrote some before and would love to try and help you

I would love to read a sequel for this story! Plus your English is fine, I couldn't even tell it wasn't your first language. Also never apologize for life getting in way that just happens, writing should be something you use as an outlet. It should be fun not an obligation so don't stress it :)

I would love to see you write a sequel!

Hi Everything is fine. On this site you write and post for yourself and not others. And real Life is more important.
Even though it would be great to read a second installment of this story.
Write at your pace and enjoy yourself :)

wow! Love your storyI have to admit that I'm a gute whumpage fan, so Oliver could have suffered a bit more (physicaly). Could you suggest some good whump-fics?
Greetings from Germany

Very good.

Would love to see a sequel!

Please do a sequel!

Yes, please

I agree with Lost Time Traveler, you write English very well for a non-native speaker and no one would be able to tell right here in this apology author's note. I would still love a sequel and as your beta before I'd be happy to try to help you with the plot and even to try to be your beta again. Before when I helped you I was unemployed and had less of a social life on weekends and weeknights. Now I host a podcast, work full time, commute a total of almost 3 hours each day, and barely have time for half the fandom things I want to do. But I'm still watching Arrow, and I would love to help in whatever way I can, if you want me. ;)

Yes please continue. And honestly you write English better than most native English speakers.

I'd love to read the sequel to this story!

LOVE to read any of your stories.

I would love to read a follow up story to ESSS!