Hi, so i hav been reading your fanfiction about pitch for a while now and its really awesome. You captured his way of thinking very well, in my opinion. Much better than other people who have written fanfic about him. I read his dialogues in that british accent of his. Your writing style and everything is so interesting and hooking, i lov it. What I'm mad about is that his story ends here very abruptly and i am dying to know what happens next. I understand that writing fanfic takes a lot of time and effort but if u could somehow send me a rough draft of what happens next, that would be amazing. Pretty please, with sugar on top?

I don't know how many times I burst into laughter or started silently screaming BURN so I don't wake anyone.
You can't abandon this story! The first one was amazing! This is already, just as good!
I hope you update this soon!
~KitoH

U don't need sharp objects if u have a phone book!

MORE! please...

have April have crazy dreams and even crazier nightmares, like her favorite dream is teleporting and turning into a demon on Halloween to scare people so they drop the whole candy bowl into her bag so she can get tons of candy, and her nightmare be like the one (I got upset) that turns into a dream, where she would rather have the nightmare

Please tell me you're going to keep up with this story! I love the way you're writing!

Uh-oh...

Ahahahahah! LOL! The last line was epic!

All I can say is; UPDATE SOON.

There's times that I hate the likes of Cupid. And I hate him right now.

Priceless!

I can't... okay now I can... I think I might have almost... Lol

I just love it! And I'm sure that Amores's warning has to do with Amelia! I can't wait to read the part where Pitch will return her jewelery to her! And I also wonder if Lily is going to made him go on a date with Amelia!

i really want to read this now but i want to make sure that u will continue this. i cant keep holding on to three chapters forever...

More please