Reviews for Deserted
SuziH-J chapter 1 . 8/23
Thank you for saving Ianto from Thames House. I started crying when Ianto reached out to shake Jack’s hand as I thought he was being left behind again, they then turned to tears of joy that Jack wanted to take him away.
Loved the ending, it what they both deserved.
missemmatorchwood chapter 1 . 1/13
Absolutely perfect! THIS is the way that story should have ended! Thank you!
Beatlemaniac45 chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
This was pretty deep for a not 'Jack wishes he was dead and would never come back as he watches the human he loves most turn to dust' fic
TheHuntersMoon chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
See he should never have died! I'm so unbelievably upset about it! And Tosh and Owen too! They all deserved that bit of normality that Gwen had! They all deserved to have love and they all did but RTD killed them all off :'( *cries* sorry sorry! But thank you for making Ianto stay in the warehouse!
Quiet Time chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
It hadn't occurred to me before that Jack ran off with their only 'Dalek effective' weapon but given that they were reduced to using handguns, he must have. Words fail...especially the sort the site will allow.
That aside, this was the sweetest (and most concise - I so admire how you do that!) fix-it in existence.
janie17 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Beautiful! I love how it ended. Four times was definitely four too many, I'm glad Jack and Ianto get to be together exploring the stars now!
Alice Carter chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Those two are the perfect complement. Lovely story!
ukdramafan chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Why couldn't this be canon? Nicely imagined and told.
Francine S chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Great story. Favorite part was Ianto not being there with the 456. Great reflection on how Jack's abandonment effected Ianto each time, especially when he went off with The Doctor against the Daleks. I hadn't really thought of that as an abandonment before this but can see how it could be classified as one now. Great story!
NinjaGirlRebecca chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
:) I much prefer this to what actually happened
workingsomecoffeemagic chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Aaww, beautiful! And it holds a lot of hope for the future! Fantastic writing!
ther1945 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Beautiful! This is definitely the way it should have ended in canon. I like to think that Jack & Ianto are still out there, traveling among the stars.
sd4ianto chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
That was very touching. I truly enjoyed your fix-it fic. It still made me cry even knowing the last time he was going with.
penguincrazy chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
loved it, yes four time was too many times. Glad Ianto left with Jack!
sandysan2013 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Yay! New cannon!
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