I absolutely loved the beginning of this story . . . before the baby stuff. The passion, the romance. Amanda being a strong independent women is my favorite. The way you wrote the love scenes. Every woman who reads romance novels wants to be cherished / possessed / desired / loved like that. Excellent work. Me personally, I think it would have been a stronger story if the test was negative & they progressed along at a normal pace.

I read this several months ago. I saw it again today so I had to read it again. It’s just a really nice happy story. I have come to realize that I like AU Stories best of all. You did such a great job with this. Thanksfor sharing.

I loved this story! It was very touching, full of love romance with a little bit of field work and other action throughout. Loved that they gave two baby girls. This had been one of ny favorites to read. Great job!

Great story! Can't wait for another one!

I just found this lovely story and I loved it. Thank you

GOOD STORY HOPE THERE IS MORE

Loved this story, just wish it was longer! Great job with it!

the monitor was on! lol! Enjoyed this ending much better, thanks for taking the time to do it! :)

Yeah, I'm so glad that you redone chapter 14! I absolutely love it now! I hope you write more. It'd be nice to kind of have like a day to day story with this one as far as the daily lives of Lee, Amanda, the boys, and now the girls. Like mainly about their life at home. Does Dotty still live with them? Did they get a bigger house for everyone including Dotty? This story will be in my favorites for sure!

Love it! Thank you for reworking the ending. You did a Greta Job with closing the story! Thanks

YAY! I so love this ending better. I'm glad you re-worked to give them a little more transition from lovers to husband and wife. I love the scene with Francine too when she finds out Amanda's expecting and that Lee's the father. Also, liked how Amanda told him she was pregnant again. Very cute. Much better! Great job!

I read this the first day that you posted this, but I've been holding off on reviewing until I could put my thoughts into the right words.I really enjoyed this story up to this chapter. In this chapter I enjoyed the interactions between all the family member and the characterizations were great, however, I feel that this and prior chapters built up a lost of anticipation to and ending that was rather abrupt. It would have been nice to see how our heroes got from the "You shouldn't kiss me like that" which I loved by they way, to the many months later. Obviously, they got together if they're having a second child together three years later, but it felt like there were a lot of pieces missing.

Finally, I got to finish reading this story. Great job! Really enjoyed it.

I liked this story overall. It would have been nicer though if you had not rushed through the ending though. Thanks for sharing. xo

Awe, is this really the end? I see that they're still together and obviously they're married, I think and hope! Sounds like they maybe live together now sometime when she was pregnant. I had to re-read the last part again to maybe get that. It was a little rushed though. It'd be nice to find out if they really got married and how involved is she at the Agency between the 1st and 2nd baby. Seems like the boys liked Lee but what was it like when he actually moved in and was they married before he moved in or not? Umm still some questions left unanswered but I guess everyone can fill in the blanks. Is that how it is supposed to be because it'd be nice to know some more details. Thanks again! Still love the story though but a little rushed at the end and I need more details!