Reviews for Pick It All Up and Start Again
Guest chapter 20 . 8/13/2016
What a fantastic ending! I'd love to see a sequel to this story! I had a lot of fun reading this - you did an amazing job with the writing and the development of the mystery! I'd love to see some of these ideas in the show. :) Thanks for writing this!
Guest chapter 19 . 8/13/2016
What a lovely chapter! I really enjoyed the ending scene, and I honestly don't blame Spencer and Toby for wanting to leave Rosewood forever. And Melissa...she saw Spencer as a little sister, someone she needed to protect at all costs, and made a few mistakes along the way. She reminds me a little of Itachi actually in that sense.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/13/2016
I swear, Alison's capable of surviving the zombie apocalypse...okay, but in all honesty, I had a feeling she was still alive. Wren and CeCe just didn't strike me as telling the truth about that particular part. Lovely chapter as always! :)
Guest chapter 17 . 8/13/2016
So I was right! But whoa, what's Wren's real name? This...actually makes a LOT of sense. It explains the plotholes in the canon, and honestly, I can see this happening. And I'm so, SO glad Toby and Caleb got the police to come out! Did Caleb attach a bug on them? Amazing chapter - it was well worth the buildup! :)
Guest chapter 16 . 8/13/2016
...this is much too easy. Somehow I get the feeling that Melissa is just a distraction for the girls. But is -A CeCe and Wren together? Wren would explain the surgical knowledge and the transfer of power between him and Mona, and CeCe would explain the connection to Mrs. DiLaurentis...
Guest chapter 15 . 8/13/2016
-A has Alison now, doesn't she? And now, I'm convinced it's Melissa (maybe with CeCe Drake too) doing all of this. I was so happy when I saw Spencer's parents sticking up for Toby against the police officer - that was one of my favorite scenes so far. :)
Guest chapter 14 . 8/13/2016
Oh, no...this plan definitely did NOT work out well. Is Holden involved? I thought it was a tad odd that he asked Aria so late to prom...and are Spencer and the other girls alright?
Guest chapter 13 . 8/13/2016
Great chapter as always! I'm looking forward to the final confrontation! :)
Guest chapter 12 . 8/13/2016
Wonderful chapter! I love how Spencer and Toby discussed their fears for each other, because they're right - they are in serious danger...but when did Ezra see Alison before she disappeared? Could this person be Alison? Probably not...
Guest chapter 11 . 8/13/2016
Oh, no...I knew that something bad was going to happen to Ezra as soon as Aria got that text. Well, now the girls know that Ezra couldn't have been -A, and neither is Lucas...
Guest chapter 10 . 8/13/2016
Okay, so -A is somebody who's felt betrayed by Alison, and unfortunately, that's a LOT of people...this person could be Meredith actually, she was "wronged" when Alison blackmailed Aria into telling her mother about her father's affair, she's got resources and time, and she is mentally unstable. I think Jason isn't -A but rather somebody who's now caught up in this mess.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/13/2016
So I was right about Lucas (and totally wrong about who was at the door in Chapter 2) but Mona seems terrified and I'd like it if she stayed alive...Melissa obviously knows something - she's been dropping hints to Spencer since the beginning of the story. Excited for the next chapter! :)
Guest chapter 8 . 8/13/2016
Who does the skull belong to, though? Where are Jason and Mona? I have a really bad feeling they're in trouble...and is -A related to Mrs. DiLaurentis somehow? That's the only way I could see the body remaining a fake...
Guest chapter 7 . 8/13/2016
Oh my goodness, I didn't see that coming...so Meredith and CeCe are the same person? Then how did no one notice CeCe? Aria saw her, right? Unless I'm not thinking about this correctly...I hurt for Toby. I see why he wants to go and get revenge but I hope he's careful in doing so.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/13/2016
Oh, this is getting creepy now...that name isn't one I recognize and I bet you that this is the person who killed Wilden and Jenna. I actually understand Toby's relief - Jenna tormented him for years and he realized that Jenna was twisted too. Lovely chapter as always! :)
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